It is a skill of poetry to form sentences, and it is also one of the ways to express feelings through scenery.It means that in the process of discussing or expressing feelings, poetry stops suddenly, turns to scenery at the end, ends with scenery instead of emotion, and ends the poem.
Such as Wang Changling《Go into the army》: "When the pipa dances, it always closes the old mountainFarewell。Disturbing and worrying, I can't hear enough, and the high autumn moon shinesthe Great Wall。”The first three lines of the poem all express feelings with music. When it comes to "border sorrow", it uses the words "can't hear all". How can the conclusion express "can't hear all" with a limited number of seven words?The poet made a gentle stroke to end his feelings with scenery.It seems that after the scene of buying wine and drinking music in the army, there suddenly appears a vast and desolate scene that the moon shines on the Great Wall: the ancient and magnificent Great Wall is rolling, and the autumn moon shines high, which is magnificent and desolate.How would you feel about this?Is it endless nostalgia?Is it the ambition of making contributions to the frontier fortress and the worries about the reality?Xu Hun《Xie Ting Farewell》In the last two sentences of "The people who wake up after drinking in the dusk are far away, and the wind and rain are all over the west tower", the last sentence extremely writes the sadness and emptiness of waking up after leaving, but the concluding sentence does not directly express the sorrow of parting, but stops to paint the scenery.This kind of expressing feelings through scenery is more appealing than expressing other feelings directly.
Link the college entrance examination
Announce
edit
In the Shanghai College Entrance Examination, this question has been mentioned twice in recent yearsPresentation skills。In 2004, he asked to read Ming Dynasty poetsDu Xiang《Red Cliff》Poem: "The water army goes down to the east with grand plans, thousands of miles awayYangtze RiverSell in advance.Zhuge's heart is empty,Cao ConcealedThere is no Wu in my eyes.The east wind is strong when the soldiers are killed, and the sound of the flute is broken in dreams, and the moon is lonely at night.When I look back, the birds in the desert are full of smoke. "Complete the following question: Write a paragraph of appreciation text (about 80 words) from one angle (such as the relationship between scenery and emotion) based on the lines drawn in the poem and the whole poem.This is an appreciation question, and we should pay attention to finding the entry point, but the question stem has already made a hint: the relationship between scenery and emotion.This hint actually tells you the following information: from the position of the last sentence, it is to tie the situation with the scenery;fromLyric mannerLook, it is to express feelings through scenery.Therefore, it is necessary to find out why the author writes the scenery,In the sceneWhat kind of feeling does it contain.On the basis of analyzing the first six sentences, and then looking at the couplet, the poet returned to the scene that made him interested from meditation. Looking back is sad about the changes of history and the desolation of reality.The heroes of the Three Kingdoms are here today. Where can Su Zi find them.In the face of wild gulls, withered grass and cold smoke, the sentimental poet reflects on the past with a myriad of regrets, and also has a frustrated career, a bumpy life, and an ill fated fate. He expresses his sadness to whom, and ties his feelings with the scenery. The poet's feelings are all in words, which also gives the whole poem a sense of historical vicissitudes, the desolation of the universe, and the short and insignificant lifeEmptinessThe sorrowful mood interwoven.
Shanghai Spring 2006Examination paperAsk to read Song Ci《Xiqian Warbler · Dragon Boat Festival Across the Lake》: "When the Mei Lin comes to an end, the sea of pomegranates will blossom at the beginning of the season.rice dumplingGuaranteed money,TyphaJade cutting is listed in Chudai's feast.Douqiao lost his youth, and his jade wrists were tied with colored silk.Yi Cai Fang, looking at the dragon boat in pairs, waves of heart.Amazing.Where it is difficult to paint, it stirs up waves and makes snow between lakes.Draw drums and thunder, red flags and lightning, take itChampionshipsFang Che.When I looked at the water and the sky, I could still see the red curtain lifted high.Returning to the boat at night, carrying lotus for ten miles, a hook of crescent moon。”Answer: The description of the line drawing sentence is quite different from the front bustling scene. What's the best way to write it?
From the position of the whole word, the line drawing sentence is descriptive at the end, which belongs to the typical writing method of "ending feelings with scenery";StemPrompt"It is quite different from the busy scene in front of us". It is known that it is a "silent" scene, so it is“Dynamic static contrast”。If you do not know the expression skill of "ending feelings with scenery", the answer to this question will not be complete.
Artistic function
Announce
edit
It makes the poem "heartless at this time is better than passionate", which is still meaningful and can make the readerScenery descriptionIn the middle, you can gallop through imagination, appreciate the artistic conception of poetry, and produce endless charmartistic effect。It often makes poetry appear to be more meaningful, implicit and chewy.
