comment Comment: The young writer used the first person form to describe the dream of a tree, giving him life and soul. The article is novel and the sentences are vivid and interesting. The touching words of the young writer not only make my readers feel pity

comment The article is too brief. You can list one or two things that happened with Grandma.

comment This is a review of How Steel Was Tempered. The author first introduces a sentence in the book that makes him feel the most, then greatly appreciates Paul's strong, self-care and indomitable spirit in the book, and finally associates

comment The language of this article is beautiful and the structure is clear, describing the shadow of the sky without wings, but I have flown; Ai Qing said to his friend that some people may not reach the other side, but we share the sea

comment This essay is rich in language, full of literary grace, poetic and picturesque scenery and lyric, novel and unique, giving off a strong sense of calligraphy and culture. The long and short sentences in the essay are interlaced and complicated, like graceful and fresh poets singing in a low voice

comment This is a composition about the appearance, taste and function of blueberry, which shows the author's love for blueberry between the lines. Although the article is short, but the narrative is vivid, the description is exquisite, and the choice of words and sentences is accurate