Describe the teacher's composition (1)

Today is September 10, 20xx, Teachers' Day.

When I came to school in the morning, I saw many students holding silk flowers in their hands. Needless to ask, they were gifts for teachers. I also wanted to buy flowers for my teacher. On second thought, the teacher came early and left late every day. Tireless worry about us. Is it just for us to get a good result? Yes! Just give the teacher a gift that money can't buy and other students can't give - give the teacher a good mood.

So in the classroom, I listened attentively, unlike in the past. Even if others disturb me, I am not distracted. When doing homework, I was careful and did not deal with the teacher as before, for fear of making a mistake and making the teacher angry.

Today, I gave my teacher the best gift with my actions. In the future, I will work harder to realize my promise, keep the first place in grade, and win honor for my teacher!

Describe Teacher Composition (2)

Teacher, you are a song playing encouragements for us. Teacher, you are a fishing lamp that guides us towards brightness and hope. Teacher, you are a bridge. You use your youth to pave the way for us. Let us look forward to our beautiful future.

You work in your own position in obscurity and guide us with your youth and even life, but you have no regrets. You said, "I don't hope that the greatest hope is that all of you will succeed in your studies, so I will wake up with a smile in my dream." What a simple words are striking and shocking. What a simple wish that we forget you.

I often watch you take classes when you are ill, but I still have to be strong. You want us to see your energetic side. Mingming's throat is almost dumb, but he forces himself to take medicine and drink water desperately. So that all our students can hear the clear, loud and sweet voice in class. It is clear that your legs have stood up to tremble, but you have endured all these 45 minutes without any hesitation. Only you yourself are silently bearing the tiredness and pain buried deep in your heart and never complain.

I would like to send my best wishes to you through your program on September 10. By the way, I want to tell your teacher, do you know? One thing I regret most now is that I will leave all my applause to the respectable and lovely teacher after not saying thank you to you.

Thank you for accompanying me through the ups and downs of learning career.

Describing Teachers' Composition (3)

Today is the * * th Teacher's Day, and the school has carried out activities to celebrate Teacher's Day. I was very happy. The students held a flag raising ceremony on the playground. The five-star red flag rose slowly with the national anthem. At this time, my mood was very restless. I wanted to say to my teacher: I love you, teacher!

After the flag raising ceremony, the celebration of Teachers' Day held by all teachers and students in our school officially began. Senior brothers and sisters play drums; Having the ability to play the piano; And the host... there are various colorful flags flying in the wind on both sides of the performance team, rendering a lively scene.

The students performed a variety of programs on the stage. In particular, several students in our class performed: "How does a teacher teach, care and help students in school". At this time, my tears were about to flow out. Seeing this scene, I couldn't help thinking: Isn't this what our class teacher Wang usually teaches us? I am proud that we have such an excellent teacher!

The most attractive thing is the teachers' performance. Our school has four male teachers and five female teachers also performing on the stage. They performed very well. I thought: "Our teachers can not only teach us how to read and behave, but also have so many things worth learning!"

A burst of warm applause interrupted my thoughts, and the celebration ended successfully. I want to say loudly to the teacher: "Teacher, I love you!"

Describing Teachers' Composition (4)

September 10 is Teachers' Day, which is an exclusive holiday for teachers. Many students have prepared many gifts, but I'm sorry because I forgot to prepare gifts. Now let's see what gifts we have prepared for our teachers!

There are many gifts, such as chocolate, flowers, and some dolls. There are even hand made greeting cards or small items.

Zheng Xianghan sent a pea pod to Mr. Liang. When he opened it, the peas in it were smiling. How lovely! A lot of students in the class want to use this for fun, and I feel it's pretty good.

In fact, it is not important to give gifts on Teacher's Day. The key is to have blessings. Of course, it is not a simple blessing like a bureau of happy Teacher's Day. I saw a good wish on the Internet a few days ago and quote it here:

Facing the platform, back against the blackboard, in the long river of time, the teacher is you to weave 40 minutes of hard work and wisdom into countless dazzling halos! A colorful life is unforgettable! Happy Teachers' Day!

In this sentence, I experienced the hard work of teachers. The teacher sacrificed 40 minutes to teach for us, but he didn't have much rest. After class, the teacher has to prepare lessons and correct homework. We should be grateful to the teacher.

Teacher, you have worked hard! We should admire our teachers.

Describing Teachers' Composition (5)

September 10th is always unforgettable.

With a squeak, the door was slowly pushed open. The head teacher dragged his tired body into the classroom with a little anger. Before he could put down his bag and have a rest, he was invited out by the sports committee member on the grounds that he had something to discuss. As soon as the head teacher left the classroom, all the lights in the classroom suddenly went out. It didn't matter that the head teacher, who was already angry, was suddenly on fire. Just as the head teacher angrily entered the classroom to get angry, all the lights suddenly came on again, and a bunch of flowers were sent to the old class, followed by the slightly unfamiliar chorus of the students - Heart of Gratitude

'Thank you, thank you for being with me all my life...' The class director suddenly realized in the singing of the students' sincere blessings, followed by a smile full of her face and sparkling tears in her eyes. The students gave her another hand made gift. Old Ben said that she was very surprised today and misunderstood us. Then she said many encouraging words to us

Today is the 28th Teacher's Day, a day for all teachers in the world, and a day for students to repay teachers' education. But we can't just do this on this day. We should remember the kindness of teachers' education. We should treat every day as Teacher's Day, study hard, be strict with ourselves, and make teachers happy!

Describing Teachers' Composition (6)

Teacher, although I don't know what month your birthday is, I know that September 10 is your birthday, because it is Teachers' Day.

Teacher, you are a sweet candle, illuminating our way forward; You are a hardworking gardener, cultivating our seedlings to grow healthily. Teacher, you work hard for us day and night, and prepare lessons and correct homework every night. Teacher, you worry too much about us. Your stern face can hardly hide your caring motherly heart. I remember one time, a classmate accidentally fell down and broke his knee in PE class. I ran to report to you. Seeing your anxious eyes, I couldn't help thinking from my heart that you really love us, teacher! See you running to the playground quickly, pick up the injured student and go straight to the infirmary. The sweat on his head ran across his face one by one. I was so moved at that time.

Teacher, you should prepare the content of tomorrow's class for us every night. Sometimes until late at night, I will see your dark eyes the next day. I thought, the teacher must have stayed up late again last night. But every time I can listen attentively and clearly, so I can easily absorb the content of the class. This is the result of your hard preparation! Teacher, do you know? When you set out for training and study, you didn't have Chinese lessons for several days. I always feel that there is something missing in my life. Teacher, do you know? You have become an indispensable member of my life and study. Your role model, words and deeds affect my healthy growth; Your careful teaching, praise and encouragement have stimulated my learning and progress. Even if my grades are not good sometimes, I fail and fall without losing the confidence to strive for.

Teacher, when this warm and happy Teacher's Day comes, I want to say to the teacher: "Teacher, happy Teacher's Day! Teacher, you have worked hard!" I want to say too much to the teacher. Finally, I wish you good health and good luck.

Describing Teachers' Composition (7)

Not everything in the world could be liked by people, and so does man. Every person has the right to choose things. Maybe I am not the love student in your heart, but you are just the right teacher on my mind, and I like you, yes I do!

I like the moment you talked to me, your strict looking, your loud sound, your earnest words, ...maybe the minute my feeling was bad, yes, not good, I promise, yet the latter success I got proved that your words were good for me...

I can't imagine my life without you-my lovely teacher, I appreciate the god, it's he that let me come across you, and make you teach me.

So I should give some words back to you: my teacher, you've had a long day, have a rest, and happy teachers' day.

National Teacher DayNational Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May. And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher.

I still remember last year when I was feeling lost,down and out,I had no idea about about my life,my love,my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine ang smoke,I was tired,physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our buliding.

Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she aslo told me that's very common like many yong people of my age. She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone call.I just can't remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!!!Another teacher's day,to all the teachers, to our parents.

Describing Teachers' Composition (8)

The annual Teacher's Day is coming again. My friends and I made an appointment to see the retired Chinese teacher, Mr. Ma.

Everyone went to the shop to buy gifts first, and hurried to Mr. Ma's house.

When we arrived at Mr. Ma's home, he greeted us with a happy smile. Niu Mengtao took two birds in the cage. When there was a slight movement, the birds would chirp, wishing Mr. Ma happy; Zhang Jiyuan took a green pine and wished Ma would always be young; I took some mooncakes and a card made by myself, wishing Mr. Ma happiness; Other students took moon cakes, fruits, sugar, etc.... Mr. Ma smiled and said, "You really know how to buy things." Niu Mengtao said mischievously, "Of course, who let us go to the third grade this year!"

Then, we performed a carefully prepared dance for Teacher Ma: there were Thousand hand Guanyin, Seven color Light, etc. Don't forget the sketches, which made Teacher Ma laugh heartily.

In order to reward us, Miss Ma gave us candy, fruit and moon cakes that everyone gave her. We ate the "prize" in large mouthfuls and chatted with Mr. Ma from time to time. The most interesting thing is that some students, like naughty monkeys, even climbed onto Mr. Ma's apricot tree and kept making faces.

Today, we had a good time and had a good meal. We had a good day with our teachers - Teachers' Day.

Describing Teachers' Composition (9)

In this golden autumn of September, we ushered in the annual Teachers' Day again. I came to school early with a gift for teachers. When I first entered the class, I heard the students discussing something enthusiastically, and the atmosphere was very hot... I went to listen to it, oh! It was originally about how to surprise teachers. Some said, "As soon as the teacher came into the classroom, we said," Happy Teacher's Day! "Some suggested," Let's take a flower each, and put a piece of paper in the flower to write the words of blessing the teacher. "Others said loudly," We told the teacher that we must study hard... "

"Deng, Deng, Deng" the footsteps were so light and familiar. As the footsteps approached the door, we gently opened it, and the whole class said with one voice: "Happy Teacher's Day!" Then we gave our small gifts and blessings to the teacher. Some gave the teacher a jar of paper cranes containing the students' hearts and their love for the teacher; Some gave their teachers a clay figurine and wished them happy every day; There was also a greeting card for teachers, which was made by the students themselves, wishing the teacher would always be young and beautiful... At this time, a "spray" was heard, golden flowers were everywhere, and the teacher's head was covered with ribbons. I saw that the teacher's face was full of sweet smiles, and his eyes were also shining with bright tears, which were excited tears... The teacher was like our friend, and he told her everything, Teachers are like our mothers, caring for our healthy growth.

Here, in this festival belonging to teachers, I want to say to teachers: "You are hard! We will always love you."

Describing Teachers' Composition (10)

When I came to school early in the morning, I saw many students sending flowers to their teachers. At this time, I thought about many things in my heart: What can I give to my beloved teachers on Teacher's Day!

Teacher, I worship you, and I can't tell why I have this kind of worship. But I know in my heart that today is your festival, and you have come to teach us. Teacher, you are a hardworking gardener, selflessly and fearlessly "pruning" for us young trees. Teacher, you are like a tall and straight tree. Whether it is windy, rainy, or the sun is relentless, you always stick to your position and never relax. Teacher, you are also like a mother, always caring for our children, teaching us cultural knowledge, and teaching us how to behave. It's so kind, so kind.

Thank you, teacher, for your 6 years of hard work in our education, so that we know a lot of knowledge. Today is Teacher's Day. I can give you something now. Only by learning better can I repay you for your education!

Teacher, in the festival that belongs to you, I wish you a happy Teacher's Day!

Describing Teachers' Composition (11)

A week before a certain festival, let me be busy. Guess what this festival is? The answer is Teacher's Day.

Why is it Teachers' Day? Because the school has issued a study list of respect for teachers, which is to help teachers complete a task or give them a surprise. I didn't know which teacher I wanted to help, so I was at a loss. But I will try my best to make a perfect study list these days and thank the teacher for his hard work. In addition, I think if we can make progress in our studies and be obedient, the teachers will be happier!

Every year on Teacher's Day, I will think of the teachers who have taught me, whether in school or other tutors, and I will silently thank them in my heart. I hope they will be safe. I hope I am a good student in their mind, and even hope that teachers can be proud of me.

Finally, I sincerely wish every teacher here, no matter what the future, no matter whether we will meet again. In my heart, you are always good teachers. I wish teachers a happy Teacher's Day.

Describing Teachers' Composition (12)

Although the golden autumn wild chrysanthemums do not have the fragrance of roses, the magnificence of peonies, or the elegance of orchids. But I think the cuteness of wild chrysanthemums is better than winter jasmine in early spring, lotus in midsummer and wintersweet.

Among all the flowers, I have a special liking for wild chrysanthemums, so on Teacher's Day, I will send a bunch of beautiful wild chrysanthemums to my teacher.

In the morning of September 10th, I ran back to the mountain early. Along the way, the green grass cheered me up: "Run, run!" The bright flowers cheered me up: "Come on, come on!" When I got to the back mountain, I looked up and said, "Wow! There are so many wild chrysanthemums! How beautiful they are!" I couldn't wait to pick them up.

After a while, I picked a large bunch of wild chrysanthemums, yellow and white. Looking at the flowers in my hand seems to smile at me. In front of my eyes, the teacher's kind and kind smile appeared. The teacher must smile like this beautiful flower when he sees it. I ran quickly to the teacher's office.

The teacher was not in the office. Fortunately, the window was open, so I gently placed a handful of wild chrysanthemums on the teacher's desk.

Teacher! Teacher, you are a great engineer shaping the human soul, a gardener cultivating bright flowers, and a loving mother nurturing our healthy growth. But you, like this humble wild chrysanthemum, silently brought us the fragrance. In order to express my admiration and gratitude for you, please let me express my heart with this humble wild chrysanthemum!

Another gust of autumn wind blows, and the wild chrysanthemums send out bursts of strong fragrance, which permeates the whole office and campus

Describing Teachers' Composition (13)

Today is a day that makes teachers and students happy and unforgettable, because it is the annual Teacher's Day.

In the morning, I got up early, and what gift did I want to give Mr. Jin? I have to give you a special one! Many ideas come into my mind, a beautiful picture, a beautiful greeting card, a delicate pen, or a bunch of beautiful flowers? I thought as I walked along the road. Suddenly, I found that the door of the flower shop across the road was crowded with people. I decided to give Mr. Jin and Mr. Yang a bunch of fragrant flowers.

I came to school happily with two beautiful flowers in my hands. When I walked into the classroom, I was looking forward to the two teachers coming to school soon. I kept looking outside the classroom and thought: Hey, why hasn't the teacher come yet. Thinking and thinking, I finally saw Mr. Jin's hurried figure in the corridor. As soon as Mr. Jin came in, the students gathered around and gave their little gifts to the teacher. Some were greeting cards, some were flowers, some were balloons, and some were pictures they had painted... All kinds of things expressed the students' love and respect for the teacher. Only Miss Jin said happily, "Thank you! Thank you for your gifts!"

Miss Jin, you are just like the flowers I sent you. You have different things and things worth learning every day. You have taught us profound knowledge.

You've been working hard! Happy Teacher's Day!

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Anecdote of Teachers' Day

September 10th is Teachers' Day. This morning, all the students in Class 5 (6) decided to give the teacher a surprise.

At noon, we all came to the classroom early. After some discussion, everyone unanimously recommended that Cai Luze, an excellent painter, paint on the blackboard, and Yu Siqin, who can write fine calligraphy, write a congratulatory speech, "Teacher, hard work!" Then Yuan Yibo wrote a paragraph praising the teacher's kindness. All three of them did it seriously, and we were very satisfied with it, but we felt that the classroom was empty and the festival atmosphere was not strong enough. At this time, Mao Jinyu saw that the classroom next door was also decorated with some colorful ribbons like window decorations. He was very envious and immediately went to the canteen with Liu Minqian to buy them. Unfortunately, the ribbons were sold out. They only bought back two cans of spray glue and five balloons. So everyone started to hang colorful balloons under the lampshade, and the classroom also had some holiday decorations and decorations. However, we can't spray glue until the teacher enters the classroom. We can't help but be excited and worried about the effect.

Finally, when Mr. Shen came into the classroom. We first applauded warmly, and then Mao Jinyu and Gu Haoqi held the spray can to spray. In the classroom, there was a joyful "glue spray rain". The students were so excited that you and I rushed to express our holiday wishes to the teacher. Miss Shen was very surprised at the unexpected blessing. Seeing the smile on her face, everyone of us felt extremely happy.

Describing Teachers' Composition (15)

September 10 is Teachers' Day. We arrived at the school early, holding balloons, perfume and petals prepared in advance, and quietly waiting for the arrival of teachers.

Jingle the bell, the bell rings for class, and Miss Xu and Miss Li enter the classroom smiling. Ren Yao, hiding behind the door, suddenly ran to the teacher and sprayed perfume on the two teachers. Surprised, the teacher said, "Children, you were already ready!" As soon as the teacher said, Yue Xi sprinkled the petals on the teacher's head. Looking at the 'petal' on the teacher's head, the students cheered: "Happy Teacher's Day to Mr. Xu and Mr. Li!" The small hosts Wang Haiyan and Yang Yuexi mounted the platform and announced in unison: "Dear teachers, dear students, the X session of the Teacher's Day get-together is now beginning!" The students applauded warmly.

Then, Ren Yao, the monitor of our class, and Yang Yuexi, a member of the cultural and entertainment committee, sang the song "Whenever I Pass the Teacher's Window" loudly for the teacher. "In the quiet midnight, stars are shining, and the teacher's window is bright all night long. When I walk gently past your window, the bright light shines in my heart..." Listening to this song, I can't help thinking that last Tuesday, in order to have a good "Classics of Chinese Studies Activity Class", Mr. Xu stayed up all night and his eyes were red and swollen. So I got up my courage, walked onto the platform, bowed deeply to the teacher, and read aloud a poem, "Teacher, you are hard!" Listening to my emotional reading, Mr. Xu shed tears of excitement.

Seeing this moving scene, Mr. Li and Mr. Liu went to the platform laughing and read a poem "Ode to Teachers" to Mr. Xu. Mr. Xu listened attentively and looked so attentive. As he listened, Mr. Xu wept. She wiped the tears from the corners of her eyes and said with a smile, "Thank you! Boys and girls, Miss Li has a sweet voice. Shall we ask her to sing a song?" The students applauded warmly, and Miss Li readily agreed to sing a song called "Mom's Kiss". I didn't expect Mr. Li, who is usually so strict, to be so gentle and sing so beautifully today. We were so intoxicated with Teacher Li's singing that we forgot to applaud. It took us a long time to wake up and stand up and applaud Teacher Li.

In this way, students, you sing a song, I recite a poem, and he tells a story. We express our love to our teachers in different ways. Unconsciously, it was time to finish class, and we reluctantly left the classroom. What a happy Teacher's Day!

Describing Teachers' Composition (16)

Today is Teacher's Day on September 10th. Zhang Yan is walking happily on her way to school? Send books, greeting cards or flowers?

This is, the refreshing fragrance comes to you in waves, and you walk along a thick fragrance of flowers. Looking around, the distant hillside is covered with wild chrysanthemums, which makes you intoxicated; Red as fire; The powder looks like a cloud; As white as snow; Yellow is like gold. There are countless colors. Zhang Yan saw the beautiful and strong vitality of the wild chrysanthemums and thought: Although these wild chrysanthemums are not as beautiful and moving as roses, nor as delicate as peonies, they are the most powerful flowers. It symbolizes that the teacher has devoted her life to educating students. Isn't it just like the ordinary and simple wild chrysanthemums? Zhang Yan picked a bunch of flowers, which were as big as sunflowers and as small as a baby's cute smiling face. She picked up the flowers and sang happy songs. She walked happily to the school and the teacher's office. When she came to the window of the office, she found that the window was open, and she inserted a bunch of golden wild chrysanthemums into the teacher's pen. On that desk, there are calendars, pen holders, celestial instruments, ink bottles, textbooks, pens and a pair of reading glasses that have accompanied the teacher for many years. They are still hot! It's really hard for the teacher to come to school so early to prepare lessons, which reminds Zhang Yan of her past.

It was a sunny and hot summer day. Zhang Yan was unable to go to school because of mumps, an infectious disease. She missed many classes. But unexpectedly, despite the heat and eating at noon, Miss Li ran to Zhang Yan's home to make up lessons for her. Beany sweat rolled on Miss Li's forehead. Time went by quickly, but the teacher still explained the problem to Zhang Yan without any complaints until Zhang Yan understood it. The teacher imparted knowledge to Zhang Yan, but he was hungry.

"When the silkworms die, the wax torches become ashes and tears begin to dry." Just like the silkworms, the teacher left his knowledge to the students without reservation, and trained us to be the pillars of the motherland with hard work and sweat. Today I give you an ordinary gift, but I express my deep blessing to you on Teacher's Day.

Describing Teachers' Composition (17)

Teacher's Day that year was different from previous years. It was a special day. (It happens to be Friday)

The last class on Friday is the weekly meeting class. We use the time between classes to open all the desks and chairs. We are going to give the teachers a big surprise. The teachers slowly enter the classroom. When they see us, we have used the time after class to remove the benches and arrange them into a peach shape, which was arranged and rehearsed by our nine good friends, Is to give the teacher a surprise!

When the teacher has sat on the bench, the song "Every Time I Walk by the Teacher's Bed" slowly comes to mind. It is led by KLZ (whose real name will not be announced). We dance with KLZ in our own heart seats. Of course, we also sing: ah~~~Whenever we think of you, the beloved good teacher gives the flowers on his hands to the teacher after singing. Then we bought a small notebook, a neutral pen and a greeting card (two for each) with the class fee invested by everyone, and gave them to two teachers. The notebook had the signatures of our classmates, and the greeting card had the words of blessing that our classmates thought together. After that, three friends and I said our carefully prepared words like a newspaper program, and then our last happy program was "Happy Song". We were in a group of two. Our clapping was to play you clap, and I clap that kind of clapping. Stomping feet was to hook up the feet and put them aside, gently stomped twice, and stretching the waist was to put the hands on both sides, The accompaniment in the middle is that everyone in each group is holding hands with each other and jumping and running, even the teacher is jumping with us. The music is almost over, and our carefully prepared activities are nearing the end. At last, our whole class said, "You have worked hard, teacher!" At that time, the teacher said, "This is the best Teacher's Day I have ever had!" Of course, this is also the happiest Teacher's Day we all had.

Do you think our approach is good? Maybe everyone thinks I made it up, but this is a living fact. It is a love from every student in our class to the teacher!

Describing Teachers' Composition (18)

The flower thanks the sun, because the sun nurtures it to grow; The eagle thanks the blue sky for letting it fly freely; I thank you, teacher, because you taught me knowledge and let me grow up healthily. Teacher, as your student, I thank you for your selfless dedication to our youth. When we are about to graduate, you will fully absorb water for us like a sponge in order to get us admitted to a good school. As soon as we have time, we will open a small kitchen ", often forcing some students to learn. Not hesitate to bear the title of "fascism". Although in the eyes of some students, my Chinese teacher, Miss Li, plays the role of "fascism", I think that as a teacher, she has really achieved the goal of making silk from spring silkworm to death, and the wax torch starts to dry when it turns into ashes. " Teacher, your love is as warm as the sun, as warm as the spring breeze, and as sweet as the spring.

Your love is more severe than father's love, more delicate than mother's love, and more pure than friendship. Your love is the greatest, selfless and sacred. But we still don't appreciate your feelings, and we often add chaos to your feelings when you are most vulnerable. At that time, your husband was ill and hospitalized. You could have asked for leave to accompany him in the hospital. But you chose to stay and continue to teach us. Every day, the school and hospital run together. Finally, your husband died. You can't rest assured of us. After a few days' rest, you come back to us. In those days, you added a lot of silver on your head. Although we are just a rising sun, we should also learn to release warmth, but also think and act with a grateful heart to our teachers. After all, teachers pay too much for us. Madame Curie once said that no matter how proud a person's achievements are, he should always remember that his teachers planted the first seeds for their growth. " Locke believes that gratitude is a spiritual treasure. " Rousseau also said that there is no real virtue without gratitude. " At the weekend, I returned to my alma mater. During the short summer vacation, some small changes took place on the campus. It seemed that there was more silver on the teachers' temples. The teacher seemed very happy when he saw me coming, saying that our students have grown taller again, and some of them are almost unrecognizable.

I bought a small gift for each of the two teachers, which represents my deep blessing. All along, we only know how to take, not how to be grateful. At the moment when the 23rd Teacher's Day is coming, I want to say to all respected teachers, teacher, you have worked hard!

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My family has three happy little goldfish, they are cute, clever and attractive!

In order to better distinguish them, I gave them three nice names. There is a small goldfish. It is light red all over. When I feed it, it will be the first to rush in front. It is very smart. I call it "smart"; There is also a small goldfish. Its back is red like fire, its belly is white like frost, and its fins are black and white. All kinds of colors are very lively, so I call it "lively"; The last small goldfish is the most special one. It has a black dot on its cheek, which is the size of black bean, so I call it "black dot".

When I feed them food, some of them stare at the food all the time, some rush to swallow it in the stomach at all costs, and others swallow it in and spit it out, as if they are playing instead of eating. When they are full, they swim happily in their own small world. Their round mouths spit out a bunch of bubbles from time to time. They are very happy! When they are full and have enough fun, they will float in the aquarium and fall asleep without moving. They don't sleep with our eyes open, because fish have no eyelids.

These are my three happy little goldfish!

Teacher's comment: while naming the little goldfish, the exercise has skillfully displayed the different shapes of the three little goldfish to the readers. The exercises echo from the beginning to the end, using figurative and anthropomorphic rhetoric, and using natural and fluent language to beautify the text.

Who is "Heihei"? Heihei is a small fish raised by my family and a gift from my mother on Children's Day. I put it carefully into the fish tank, so that he can have a warm and comfortable home. The whole body of Heihei is black, so it has this name. Only its belly is golden. Black and gold interlace together, making black more beautiful and lovely. Its eyes are crystal clear, and it shuttles freely in the spacious aquarium. It plays flexibly in the water, and its four fins swing with it in the water.

What Heihete likes to eat is bread crumbs. If I forget to feed him one day, he will swim in the water and sometimes jump out of the water. It seems that he is really a glutton. When I sprinkle bread crumbs into the fish tank, Heihei greedily eats up the food, and then lies down on the shell to rest comfortably without even saying thank you. It's really hard for people to take it.

One morning, I came to the fish tank and saw Heihei sleeping motionless. I knocked on the fish tank and Heihei wagged his tail, as if to say, "Who is making so much noise? Nobody sleeps at all." I said, "Big sluggard, get up quickly. Look at the time it is now and still sleeping there." I grabbed a handful of bread crumbs and threw them into the tank. As soon as it smelled the water on the downstream, Eating with a big mouth, it's like saying, "The little master is the best for me!" This little guy is very popular.

I like my black, it makes my life very interesting and happy.

Teacher's comment: The little author of this article focuses on the description of Heihei's appearance. Look at the wolfing, comfortable and relaxed appearance and the lazy tail. It's really a lovely little goldfish. This article is a good article with complete structure, accurate language and specific image description.

Three days ago, the teacher saw a tiger parrot of others doing somersaults and swinging. It was very cute. The teacher was very envious, so he bought one. Unfortunately, this guy was dull, so he named it "Dumb".

A Dui is very beautiful. Its head is bright yellow, and its shape is circular, like a thumb. Its nostrils are light blue, with small nostrils facing the sky. Its eyes are only half the size of mung beans, and its eyes can become larger and smaller. Its green stomach bulged, as if there was a ball in its belly, and it was about to spit out from its mouth. Its back is black and yellow, like a beautiful woman wearing a beautiful feather coat. It also has a long blue and yellow tail, straight as a stick.

Adai is very lazy. When she stands, she doesn't move, she looks thoughtful, as if she is thinking: "What are you looking at me for?" I reach out to touch her, but she still stands, not wanting to move. It doesn't eat until people feed it to its mouth. It seems to say, "I'm the emperor, get food quickly!" After eating, millet sticks to its mouth, and it won't shake.

After standing for a long time, he may feel bored and start to comb his hair. One hair sticks to his nose, and he doesn't shake it off. I couldn't help but say, "This parrot is too lazy!" After hearing this, it immediately made a sound of "gurgling" and seemed to be angry and said, "How dare you scold the emperor? Come on, drag him down and hit a hundred boards!" At this time, I was going to the toilet, and I stood up with a "thump". It thought I was an assassin and flew under the table to hide.

This is the lazy parrot, Adai. Although it is lazy, it is lazy and cute.

Teacher's comment: This is a kind of article. The little author focused on the lazy characteristics of "A Dui" and sketched the appearance of "A Dui". This arrangement is detailed and appropriate, which can highlight the theme. The article is vivid in language, showing the author's love for "Dumb" everywhere, such as "its back is black and yellow, like a beautiful woman wearing a beautiful feather coat".