Composition of Zhejiang Province (16 anthologies)
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Composition of Zhejiang Province (1)

Feel the countryside At first, I thought that the countryside was a fairytale paradise. It fades the pomp of the city and washes away the complexity of the earth. It may be Al on Van Gogh's canvas, with a pure blue sky like a mirror, a colorful sea of flowers like oil paint, and the golden sunflowers growing seeds of hope under the feeding of the sun; It may be the idyll in Tao Qian's poems, which is interpreting the story of the immortal couple in the misty atmosphere. The slanting sunlight is light, which is leisurely and leisurely. It is just the countryside in the poem and painting. When we really go into the countryside and feel the countryside with heart, we will find that our countryside is experiencing pain. There is also sunshine, which is not warm but scorching the land. Looking far away, the stooped figure on the land spent all his efforts on this land in the spring and autumn. He grew up on this land, and his sweat nourished this land; He learned to be strong on this land, and his steps strengthened this land; He was born in the loess and returned to the loess for generations. When the storm came, his heart quivered like the swaying crops in the field, and his tears crisscrossed his ravine full cheeks, like the water that flooded the field, layer upon layer overflowed his heart and flooded his breath. When drought came, crops were falling like his thin body. He could not see hope and harvest. His chaotic eyes were dry and empty. They also have happy times, but this happiness seems so humble. Their greatest happiness is the harvest. The plump grains are like jewels, and their eyes smile like crescent moon. The life they desire most is good weather. They just want to have such an ordinary life. Will such a village disappoint us when we face such a prospect? In fact, the countryside is more real because of this cruel beauty. To experience the countryside, don't always be a leisurely tourist. While appreciating its tranquility and purity, give it more attention to its pain, and give it more understanding and compassion for its hard work. Feel the countryside, feel the pulse of agricultural civilization, feel the most vigorous cry of China, feel the thickness of the land, feel the blood and sweat of the land infiltration; Feel the most simple persistence and perseverance of Chinese farmers, and feel the pain and helplessness experienced by Chinese farmers. When we look at them with disdainful eyes, do we think that they brought us the hope of life with their blood and sweat. Look at the Chinese farmers standing forever in the history of China with the most humble posture, and let's feel the countryside with our heart!

Composition of Zhejiang Province (2)

The scorching sun is like fire, even the air seems to be thick, and cicadas only have lazy endings. Sitting on the tricycle, I let the weather control my mood, and my heart was agitated. Bored with boredom, I carefully looked at the tricycle driver in front of me. This was a middle-aged man. His long sleeved military uniform was green to black, and his heavy pants were rolled up high. He was dragging a pair of old slippers on his feet. Every time he stepped on them, he made a "squeak" sound, and his heels were white, but the wrinkles were still dirty. A canyon like crack had been winding to the depths, The blood was faintly visible. The dark old handle witnessed the aging of the car, but there was a worn basket with several empty bottles in it where the license plate should be hung. Listen to the coachman singing an unknown tune - an incomprehensible dialect, but he has a good mood. Did you make enough money today to make you so happy? "Thank you!" "You're welcome!" I handed out the money. Watching him open his wallet, scattered coins lie there quietly, nothing else. From the moment he opened his wallet, I was surprised. His happiness is simple, because he is happy. Isn't happiness a complex formation? Isn't there a rainbow after the storm? From that moment on, I found that happiness is actually very simple. Because the end is already doomed, why not face it happily? It's no use crying, so we greet with smile. The reason for happiness is just because of happiness. What is the "golden list" and what is the "bridal chamber"? It's just a complex expression of happiness, just a limited pattern for happiness. Once "people" are set up, they will become "prisoners". How can happiness come from? From that moment on, simplicity is happiness. There is great beauty in heaven and earth; Life has great fatigue, hiding in the complicated place. People are happy when they are simple, but few people are happy; People suffer when they are complicated, but painful people are bustling. Let go of your obsession with matter and believe that simplicity is happiness. From that moment on, I understand that happiness is the reason for happiness. From this moment on, please believe that happiness is simple and happy! Comments>>>In the real world, there are big people and small people. In works with ideas, there is no such clear distinction. In the small people, we can read a deep flavor of life, and in the big people, we can read the shortcomings of human nature. The description of the details shows great skill. The description of the coachman's situation makes us feel some sympathy: cracked heels, old vehicles, worn baskets, especially the description of heels with association, which makes readers feel the same, conveys a sadness, and forms a tension corresponding to the optimism and openness of the coachman. The author read a great beauty of human nature in this humble coachman - contentment and happiness, which triggered a long series of thoughts, and then obtained a feeling of life: "There is great beauty in heaven and earth, which can be found in simplicity; there is great fatigue in life, which can be found in complexity."


Composition of Zhejiang Province (3)

2004 Jiaxing City, Zhejiang Province High School Entrance Examination Composition

1、 Composition questions

Read the following text and write a composition according to the requirements.

Li Dazhao's "Today" tells us such a truth: "The past and the future are all present." Yes, grasp the present and have the future; Grasp the opportunity to succeed; Grasp principles and win respect. Grasp kinship and friendship, grasp laws and methods, grasp progress and discretion

Please write a composition on the topic of "grasping".

Requirements: ① Self prepared topic; ② Style selection; ③ Not less than 500 words; ④ The true names of people, schools and places shall not appear in the text.

3、 A brief review of excellent works

[Example 1]

Beethoven told me

Countless stops and hesitations, I really don't want to pry into your initial state of mind when you were deaf, nor to lift up that painful memory I think

So I just listen to your Destiny, Pastoral and Ninth Symphony quietly; Just silently taste, taste the words about you in the Biography of Celebrities. But you told me unreservedly that the fate is in your own hands!

The destiny is in your own hands? I am a little confused: you are deaf, your feelings are broken, your life is sad, and the frivolous music style at that time... Is your destiny still in your own hands?

You seem to see my puzzlement, so tell me

Although you have ear disease, you have music - an ocean that can let your thoughts and feelings run at will. You roam in this vast and boundless sea, capturing crystal waves. Therefore, the Ninth Symphony was born. Its appearance seems to be pregnant with revolution, causing an unprecedented sensation, and you have also been released to master music in your own hands.

Although you live in poverty and sorrow, you have a high head. Never forget that time when you and Goethe were walking in the street, they suddenly met a noble team. Goethe takes off his hat to salute, and you stand there, let those nobles salute you! Do you know how many people were shocked by this move? Don't bow to the powerful, you will always hold your personality in your own hands.

Although you have lost all "joy", you have left countless joys to the world. As a person who lost happiness and created happiness, you told me that fate is in your own hands!

Your destiny is in your own hands! I see!

It is not God who creates destiny, but oneself. Many times, we have to face many disasters. At that time, we often complain about the injustice of God. Now it is unnecessary to think about it, because we are the creators of our destiny:

We can't control the weather, but we can change our mood;

We can't change the "generous gift" that God gives us, but we can adjust our attitude towards life;

We can not determine the length of life, but can expand the width of life;

We can't change our origin, but we can control our personality;

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The destiny is in our own hands. Each of us should use our own calm in the face of difficulties and our wisdom as the spirit of all things to control ourselves and drive our own ship of life.

[Brief comment]

This composition shows talent in the atmosphere. The author gives play to Beethoven's examples that he is familiar with. Based on the old themes, the author turns out new meanings. The topic is tight, the vision is wide, the thought is active, the thinking is flexible, the literary grace is flying, and the composition is completely natural, showing keen vision and unique thinking. Focusing on the theme of "grasping the destiny", the full text not only gives examples, but also explains the truth, which can be said to be thorough and thought-provoking.


Composition of Zhejiang Province (4)

Sentence Patterns and Vocabulary of the Latest College Entrance Examination English Composition in Zhejiang Province

1、 Opening sentence pattern

1.As far as ... Is concerned

2.It goes without saying that... It goes without saying that

3.It can be said with certainty that... It is safe to say that

4. As the proverbial says.

5.It has to be noticed that... It must be noted that

6.It's generally recognized that... It is generally believed that

7.It's likely that ... This may be because

8.It's hardly that... It's hard

9.It's hardly too much to say that... It hardly says much

10.What calls for special attention is that... Special attention shall be paid to

2、 Cohesive sentence pattern

1.A case in point is ... A typical example is

2.As is often the case... Because usually

3. As stated in the previous paragraph

4.But the problem is not so simple. Therebefore

The problem is not so simple, so

5.But it's a pity that... But unfortunately

6.For all that... For all this In spite of the fact

7. Further, we hold opinion that

8. However, the difficulty lies in

9. Similarly, we should pay attention to

10.not(that)... but(that)... No, it's

11. In view of the present station

12.As has been mentioned above... As mentioned above

13. In this respect, we may as well (say)

14. However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is

3、 Closing sentence pattern

1.I will conclude by saying... Finally, I want to say

2. Therebefore, we have the reason to believe that

3. All things considered, It may be safe said that It can safely say that

4. Therebefore, in my opinion, it's more advisable

5. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that

6. The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that

7.It can be concluded from the discussion that... From it, we can draw the conclusion that

8. From my point of view, it would be better if

4、 Sentence pattern commonly used in the introductory paragraph

1. Some people think that …. To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below

None

2. For years,... has been seen as..., but things are quite different now.

3. I believe the title statement is valid because…. I think this argument is correct, because

4. I cannot completely agree with the idea that

5. My argument for this view goes as follows.

6. Along with the development of..., more and more

7. There is a long running debate as to who

8. It is common/generally/widely/trusted/held/accepted/recognized that

9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/the latter.

10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.

Common sentence patterns and expressions for comparison and contrast

1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.3. A and B differ in…. 4. A differs from B in….5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….6. Compared

with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….

Seven Sentence Patterns Commonly Used in Deduction

1. There are several reasons for..., but in general, they come down to three major ones.

2. There are many factors that may account for..., but the following are the most typical ones, But the following is the most typical.

3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.

4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.

5. The reasons are as follows.

Eight Common Sentence Patterns of Causal Reasoning

1.Because/Since we read the book, We have learned a lot. 2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.

5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.6.Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.7. The

Effect/sequence/result of eating too much is overweight. 8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.

1、 Advanced vocabulary

1. Replace think of

Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. →

An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.

2. devete replaces spend

He spends all his spare time in reading. →

He devotes all his spare time to reading.

3. Seek replaces want/look for

They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.

4. replace ordinary with average

I’m an average ( ordinary ) student.

5. but replace very

The film we saw last night was very interesting. →

The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.

The film we saw last night was anything but boring.

6. seat Replace sit

On his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.

7. Replace should

He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.

8. Replace thank

Thank you very much for you help. →

We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.

9. The case replaces true

I don’t think it is the case ( true ).

10. on Replace as soon as

As soon as he arrived, he began his research. →

On his arrival, he began his research..

11. due to replace cause of

He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.

12. Cover replaces walk/read

After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.

13. contribute to replace be helpful/useful

Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →

Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.

14. Round the corner to replace coming Soon/Nearby

① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?

② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).

The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. →

The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.

16. have a ball Replace have a good time/enjoy oneself

After visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).

17. come up with replace think of

Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.

18. Set aside to replace save

Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books. (2004 Tianjin Volume)

19. be of+n. Replace adj

The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.

20. refer to replace talk about/of, statement

The professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.

21. can not but/can not help but replace have to do

I could not but (had to) go home.

22. more often than not replace normally

More often than not (Usually), the meaning of many words can be easily guessed.

23. Lest replace so that/in order that

I wrote down his telephone number so that I would not forget it. →

I wrote down his telephone number lest I (should) forget it.

24. be long for sth./be long to do sth. Replace want to do sth./wish for

I want to see you very much. →

I am long to see you.

25. be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be added to replace be interesting in

He is caught up in ( very interested in ) collecting stamps.

26. more than replace very

① I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September.

I'm more than gland to learn that you are coming in September. (NMET 2003) ② If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than gland to help. (2004 National Volume)

27. perfect (ly) replace good/very well

He speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).

28. Do sb a/the favor Replace help

Would you please do me the favor ( help me ) to turn down the radio?

29. The other day replaces a few days ago

The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. ( NMET 1997 )

30. in the course of replacing during

In the course of (During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.

31. the majority of replacement

The majority of (Most of ) the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema.

32. consist of replacing be make up of

Our class consists of ( is made up of ) 50 students.

33. be worthy out replace be tired/broken

① After five hours’ non-stop work, we were all worn out (tired).

② My shoes are worn out (broken). Please buy me a new pair.

What do think has become of ( happened to ) him ?

35. tend to replace look after

36. on condition that replaces as long as

37. Never less Replace hower

38. express one's satisfaction with

39. spare no efforts to do Replace try one's best to do

40. many a replaces many

41. Be rusted off one's feet Replace be busy in doing

42. a handy of replacing a little/some

43. replace at the same time

44. get to one's feet replace stand up

45. Beneath replaces under

46. Occasionally replace some/once in while

47. Replace for example for instance

48. seldom replaces not often

49. Wealth replaces rich

50. Amazing Replace subverting

51. as a matter of fact replacing in fact

2、 Advanced sentence structure

◆ It sentence pattern

① It will be + some time + before…

It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars.

② It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.

It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.

He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts

③ It is+emphasized part+that

1) It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.

2) Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.

◆ more... than any other indicates the highest level

Among the optional courses, spoken English and computer study are more

popular than any one else.

◆ Noun clause

① It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in National Volume III)

② ◆ (non restrictive) attributive clause

① The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street. It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.→

② It was quite an experience for us both, Beijing volume)

◆ participle structure

① I don't know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing ② We'll most stay at home in the eventing watching TV, playing games, and National Volume II)

③ Healing this, a few people become to run after him

④ Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor

◆ with structure

① ②

◆ Inversion

① The library is to the east of the teaching building.

② Although we are tired, we are happy.→

③ Shanghai Volume)

④ May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe.! (Hunan volume in 2007)

◆ Passive voice

① Opinions are divided on the question. (NMET 2002)

② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students. (2004 National Volume IV)

③ New factories, houses and roads have been built. (2004 Jiangsu volume)

◆ Clever rewriting

(1) . Only changed to no one but

Only Tom passed the exam last week. → No one but Tom passed the exam.

(2) . as soon as... changed to No sooner... than.../Hardly... when.../Immediately.../The

moment No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.

(3).have sb/sth do/done

The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken (her leg was

broken.).

(4) . Change the position of the parenthesis

① However, they suggest fees should be charged low. →

They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. (NMET 2002)

② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well

you’ve learned Chinese. →

This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how

Well you've learned Chinese. (2004 National Volume I)

(5). Substitute appositives for non restrictive attributive clauses

Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several

days.→

Meimei, a girl of thirty, has been learning to ride a bicycle for seven days. (2002 Shanghai Volume)

Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and

Poems that are read all over the world

◆ Others

(1) Pay attention to the beginning of the sentence

① Start with the with composite structure

With the sun setting in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.

With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems

With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want

② Begin with a non finite verb

ⅰ)In order to improve our English, our school held an English contest. ⅱ)Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner.

(2) Interlaced use of long and short sentences (note: the topic sentence should be highlighted; the longer the sentence, the better)

◆ ◆ Relevant interlanguage

1). Time sequence: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later,first of all, finally, at

last…

2). Spatial order: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side…

3). Compare: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise…

4). Cause, for, as a result, therefore, thus…

5). Indicates the progressive relationship: sides, what’s more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition, on top of…

6). And, as well as, also

7). Summary: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude…


Composition of Zhejiang Province (5)

Autumn is the season when Chinese parasol leaves fall. Standing in the middle of the street, look at the falling plane trees on both sides and listen to their whispers, "Although we can't get rid of the withering fate, we are free at the moment of falling, and we will dance beautifully, which is what we can grasp."

Is it? I walked under the sycamore tree and looked up. A leaf twirled like a ballet, swaying in the wind, like a swan's feather. Is that the four little swans? This changing dance makes me marvel that this weak, withered and fragile life performed the most beautiful dance. That tenderness also contains strength. It seems to be trying to convince me that such beauty is achievable and such brilliance is in my own hands. This leaves, a sound, finally let me no longer doubt: even if the loss of more, but one thing we can grasp, that is, their own value.

Every time I read Tang poetry and Song poetry, I feel a sense of profound enlightenment. But every time I read Li Qingzhao, the representative of the graceful school, the famous poetess, I have a special feeling in my heart. In her life, she lost a lot of husbands, relatives, friends... She walked silently with the pain of national death and some undeserved condemnation. She could not change the suffering, so she began to create glory. She believes that personality and spirit are always in her own hands, so she has the understanding of "life is a hero, death is also a ghost", the lament of "the curtain rolls the west wind, people are thinner than yellow flowers", and the "sad and miserable". Sad beauty... She used what she has mastered to show her personality and talent, added her tenderness and straightness, and decorated the Song lyrics, It also proved its value when it was lost, just like the plane leaves.

This moment of association made me fall into meditation. Life is colorful, and all kinds of temptations often make us lose our dignity and personality, which are quite important to us originally. We have humble and delicate origins, but personality can be controlled by ourselves. If these are lost, our hands will be empty. What's the difference between human beings and ordinary animals? "Who has never died since ancient times? Let's stay true to history", which is not only a heroic sentiment, but also a heroic song of people fighting against fate!

I don't know when there was a plane tree leaf in my palm. I stared at it. It was no longer a thin, weak, fragile leaf. The withered and yellow leaves had already flashed a dazzling light. In an instant, I heard its whisper again: "The most beautiful dance, this is what we can master......"

Suddenly, my hands felt heavy.


Composition of Zhejiang Province (6)

Modern society begins with Heidegger's sentence "All practical traditions have collapsed". Expectations originating from family and social traditions are losing their referential significance. But in the face of the seemingly boundless future sky, I think it is better to follow Calvino's "Baron in the Tree" life than to shake him prematurely.

Our passionate soul is naturally endowed with the pursuit of transcendence, disdaining the constraints of ancient coordinates, and loving the fragrance elsewhere. However, when this expectation flows into an unthinking criticism of past ideas, and even moves towards nihilism and Dadaism, it is worth being vigilant. The gap and dislocation with order can never be used to justify the behavior of transgression. Even though we have a detailed blueprint, we still can't keep our anchor on the top of the tide.

"My life story has always been embedded in the stories from which I obtained my own identity community." MacIntyre's words can be said to hit the theme of Ken. The sociality of human beings cannot be eliminated, and we are always taking advantage of the wind when we want to go to Qingyun. For the time being, society and family are regarded as a symbolic object with thin ridges, partly because we still lack experience and experience to support our cognition. And the arrogance of this prejudice is further above intellectual arrogance.

On the way of assiduously seeking the meaning of life, the expectation of oneself is the dynamic process of shaping in the connection with family and society. Our bottom line is the perception and recognition of different lifestyles and roles. Living in a tree, Kirchmo delivers books to robbers, builds water conservancy, and maintains his love. His concept of life is solid and practical. If we "charm" our expanding self after we borrowed Weber's words of "Fu" in the past, we will lose both external expectations and ourselves.

There is no doubt that the self targeted from the perspective of family and society is narrow and outdated. But what we should abandon is not the criticism, but the cheapness of its criticism, and its anti intellectual tendency in critical defection. In Nietzsche's view, if the process of carrying the heritage of predecessors like camels is omitted before becoming a lion and child, its "eternal repetition" can never be established. What's more, when Chen Nian, a miner poet, likes to obey the wishes of the editor, chooses to write urban novels that cater to the readers, and downgrades his 16 years underground career to a story, we are not qualified to call it kitsch.

The gap in the blueprint is only the difference in ideas after all, and the difference in the field of practice may not be clear. For example, when we pursue the direction of our hearts, we set foot in the power of the jade gallop on the way. Is this accompanied by the loss of expectations or the achievement of expectations? While we shape our life, life also casts us. It is impossible to deny the original family and sociality, but also admit that there is a frivolous distortion in your own picture. Let experience go before words. Use an unencumbered mind to appreciate the sea and sails of Cheswav Milwaukee, and follow Wittgenstein's words to keep silent about things that cannot be said.

The life style used in the tree reflects the transcendence of individuals, keeping the same but not rigidly adhering to the one-way image of "independence". This is the ideal expectation paradigm provided by Calvino for us. Living in a tree - always loving the earth - rises to the sky.


Composition of Zhejiang Province (7)

In my decades of college entrance examination composition marking career, this is a rarely encountered examination composition. Its words are sophisticated and obscure, and its thinking is profound and stable. The first time I saw it, I didn't think it was an exam composition written by a senior high school student. However, after careful reading, you will find that every sentence of it revolves around the gap and dislocation between personal life ideals and family and social expectations. The article is logical from beginning to end, well reasoned, and free of unnecessary nonsense. All quotations are not intended to fill in the facade or the number of words, This year's college entrance examination, too many compositions cited various famous quotes in this way. Of course, such words are easy to be incomprehensible, so the first marking teacher only gave 39 points, but the latter two teachers gave 55 points, indicating that our marking teacher can still identify the good and bad composition. The teachers of the composition review team carefully read the composition and unanimously gave high comments. We believe that to give full marks to this essay is not only to give it proper marks, but also to show the writing standards of senior three students in Zhejiang. However, to write like this, candidates need to read a lot of books, rather than recite a few famous quotes. And the expression of words is so academic, which is not what ordinary high school students can do. Of course, students are not expected to imitate the obscurity. (Chen Jianxin, associate professor of Zhejiang University, leader of Zhejiang Province College Entrance Examination Composition Marking Group)


Composition of Zhejiang Province (8)

1. Briefly describe your understanding of this famous saying

2. Explain with a specific example

3. Give an appropriate ending

One possible student version

Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I Spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful prounnciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.


Composition of Zhejiang Province (9)

The generous Ye Hanjun in the humble corner

Zhejiang Hangzhou Senior High School Senior Three Grade 4 Liberal Arts Class

I just want to put down my steps and contribute generously to the progress of the world with the small and shining quality of gold sand on a quiet and impermanent land.

——Primer

The wind helps free, and the eagle can fight in the sky; The soil is generous and the flowers are colorful; The stars become silent, and the Milky Way is very wide?? There are always two kinds of roles in the world: one is the leader of the spotlight and honor followers, and the other is the passer-by who disdains the useless name in the quiet corner and gives help. History always gives its heart to those who are bright and independent, and I would like to make a voice of admiration for the generosity in that humble corner, even if they are like dust, indifferent and unknown.

The world often seems too busy, and the struggle for interests has long let the ancients live in peace and quiet dedication. There is no shortage of people around who are bold in pursuing eye-catching success. Look at the desire and expectation floating in the endless auditions of the talent show, and look at the "secret script" of youth romance and getting rich that is emerging one after another to occupy a seat on the bookshelf. Yes, they can be regarded as the thrust of social progress. As the ancient western saying goes: "People die without desire", but these pursuits are often too noisy and uneasy.

So I prefer to be the silent member applauding by the humble roadside. Because he is more indifferent, he is more selfless and free. There is such a touching segment in the film "One Head and Two Big" by the famous movie star Kim Carey. At the end of the film, all the appearances and names of the mass actors were displayed one by one, occupying more than five minutes of the stage in the Hollywood blockbusters that are as precious as gold. This is to respect and cherish those humble and generous! When the protagonists are so brilliant that they capture the hearts of people, the little people they play are making the icing on the cake in the stingy corner of the camera, which is a vital supplement. Among them, there are lively children, beautiful girls, and old people with white hair like snow. They are just passers-by, but the generous and selfless beauty is enough to set on the top of the Oscar gold cup.

Giving applause and generosity in the humble corner is also a help that can not be ignored in history. In life, there are a few people who can pick up the light, but also how many people ordinary and real pay. Just as the British Museum has deliberately set aside a golden area for British citizens to show their family history and personal life, this is a humble and generous identity certificate. Those applause for London's progress, and those "roadside people" who contribute generous quality to the world, are not the protagonists worthy of the world's attention and admiration?

So my friends, I admire the history and glory of heroes, and I also affirm the hope of pursuing excellence. But I prefer to stick to my own pure sorrow, joy and quality, and give generous applause to the world and others in a humble and impermanent position.


Composition of Zhejiang Province (10)

There is no road in the world, but more people walk, it becomes a road; In this world, there is no door. When there are many crisscross paths, there is a door. There are thousands of roads in the world, and there are also thousands of doors separating the two places. People walk in the world, walk on the road, sing on the way, and enter the door. The door is the end, and each section of the road has its own end. Passing through that door, you will close a section of road, a section of love, and a section of past events will become empty again. That is a round or missing period, the end of the world. The door is the origin, and each section of the road has its own starting point. Open that door, you will have a lifetime of life, a lifetime of dreams, and a lifetime of life like a dream. It was a bright or dark fireworks, the aurora on the top of the world. The gate is a checkpoint. Some people stop moving forward, while others embark on a new journey. In front of the door is the known world, behind the door is the unknown lost way. The unknown always makes people afraid, while the known gives people a warm embrace, but at the same time, the known makes people lose their enterprising spirit, while the unknown is an endless possibility and hope. Should we take risks or settle for the status quo? Everyone has his own answer. Some people regard the door as the starting point, and some people regard the door as the end. Doors are choices. There are all kinds of doors on the crisscross roads. Behind each door, there is a different world. Enter or retreat? Is it a road or a path? Is it green hills and clear waters or tall buildings? There are different temptations and difficulties behind the door. Thousands of doors represent thousands of choices. Left to right, it is just evil. The choice is always in your own hands, only to see if you have the courage to open the door. The door is cause and effect. When you open one door, you are doomed to close another door. In front of the door is a finished fruit, behind the door is a cause waiting to be opened, which is a journey that must be taken, but the end can be held in your own hands. Origination and extinction are just like the opening and closing of the same door, ending the old relationship and restarting a new wish. The final destination of a section of road is because you set foot on the starting point. Without a beginning, there will be no end, and without a door, there will be no way. The door is reincarnation. The cycle of human journey, in the opening and closing of the door constantly restart, constantly forward. The door is the end and also the origin, like the flood recorded in the Bible, which ended a period of civilization, but also accompanied by the origin of the new world. Everything is racing on a circular track. The white line that starts the race is also the red silk at the end of the race. It keeps chasing and competing, and finally returns to the beginning. To open a door is to open a new life and a new cycle. I don't know what a door is, because it represents too much. It is a dead end and a hope, an end and an origin. It is a checkpoint, a choice, a cause and effect in the dark, and an endless cycle of rebirth. When you open the door, you can see in a flash. What I see is the world of mortals, like a dream. The world behind the door is unimaginable. You can only feel its splendor after opening it. Where there is a way, there is a door, because the door is the way.


Composition of Zhejiang Province (11)

As we all know, the life system of composition questions is "dance with shackles", because there are too many things to consider: openness of content, freedom of genre selection, whether it is conducive to examinees to write true feelings, etc. With more constraints, it becomes very difficult to make a "brilliant" topic. Since 2004, Zhejiang Province has stepped into the ranks of independent proposition, and the system of composition assignment for college entrance examination has been constantly innovated, demonstrating its own personality.

Close to real life and emphasize humanistic thinking

We often say that "life is language", and the American educator Walter once said that "the extension of language learning is equal to the extension of life." Therefore, if a composition question is far away from life, it means that it is far away from language and examinees, while the composition question of Zhejiang College Entrance Examination always pays attention to guiding students to pay attention to life.

In 2004, the topic of "humanistic literacy and development" appeared under the realistic background of rapid economic development in China. It was the consensus from top to bottom at that time to improve the humanistic literacy of the whole nation and promote the humanistic spirit. The 2005 college entrance examination essay "One branch, one leaf, one world" is to guide students to understand life from a microscopic perspective. In 2006, "having a rest/having no rest" was a topic full of speculation. When the examinee chose one of the compositions, it meant that he expressed his attitude towards busy real life. The topic composition of 2007, "Walking in the Vanishing", is full of poetic flavor. Think about it carefully, from everyone to human society, from the land under our feet to the whole world, from the bright moon last night to the sunrise this morning, what is not moving forward in the "Vanishing"? But "urban and rural are our living space; urban life and rural life are our ordinary life". Isn't their "touch" and "feeling" just a taste of real life?

Pascal said: "Man is a reed capable of thinking", "thought forms man's greatness". In the composition evaluation criteria, the "profound" thought ranks first in the development level. If a composition topic cannot provide students with space to express their thoughts, it is tantamount to encouraging them to make up feeble stories, and it is a way to express the "ego"'s groans without illness. The college entrance examination is actually a baton, the key is how to use it. Over the past five years, the composition questions of the college entrance examination in Zhejiang Province have played an active guiding role as a baton, and played an important role in guiding middle school composition teaching to focus on thinking and speculation.

What is the relationship between "humanistic quality and development"? This is a thought-provoking question. Candidates can connect with themselves and social reality; It can be grasped macroscopically or viewed microscopically. "One branch, one leaf and one world" is a combination of artistic aesthetics and philosophical speculation.

"Living with interest/living without interest" includes not only the vertical thinking on the relationship between traditional culture and modern life, but also the horizontal thinking on the relationship between individual life and life quality, which is also speculative. "Walking in the Vanishing" focuses more on the perspective of reflection to inspire people to maintain their own spiritual awareness and independent thinking about the passage of time and social changes in the process of moving forward.

This year's essay entitled "Touching the city/Feeling the countryside", with the keywords of "city" and "countryside", includes both the feelings of urban life and rural life, as well as the thinking of the city and countryside as living spaces. The purpose is to guide students to pay attention to the "current" living space that is easy to be ignored, and guide them to start from life to observe Think about the development and changes of urban and rural areas.

Focus on cultural taste and pursue openness

Language itself contains "language" and "literature". We often say that "let life go into language, let language describe life", which should be a literary description. This idea should also be integrated into the college entrance examination composition system. Good questions can promote examinees' writing and stimulate their enthusiasm for writing.

The composition of the college entrance examination in Zhejiang Province pays special attention to the combination of aesthetic form and substantial content, so that the questions are beautiful, elegant, full of cultural atmosphere, and have good enlightenment. In the past five years, the Zhejiang volume has always taken openness as the proposition pursuit of the college entrance examination composition, and has immersed itself in the composition proposition every year with the spirit of "holding the vast expanse of knowledge by swallowing and puffing, and the pen is as powerful as Xizhang" (Guo Moruo's poems). Only when the composition topic is open, there are many contents to write, and the genre is free to choose, can it be possible to write a composition with a pen that can be used as a foil.

The topic of "humanistic literacy and development" has been criticized by some people as too big and inappropriate. However, in foreign college entrance examinations, such essay questions are everywhere: "What thoughts, inventions, discoveries or creations do you think have the greatest impact on your life so far?" One of the composition questions of the French Liberal Arts Examination, "Can perception come from education?" These questions all convey a common message, that is, "Say what you think". The same is true of the topic of "humanistic literacy and development". Candidates can talk about the relationship between the two from the macro and micro dimensions, in connection with their own or social reality.

For the proposition of "one branch, one leaf, one world", all examinees need to do is to select specific images and fragments to reflect the form and characteristics of the objective world. "Living with interest/living without interest" are two attitudes towards life and life. No matter what candidates choose, there is no right or wrong, only different. "Walking in the Vanishing" is a topic without a subject, and this missing subject means the infinite possibility of material selection and thinking direction. In "touching the city/feeling the countryside", "city" and "countryside" almost cover all our living space. In fact, "touching" and "feeling" of living space is thinking about the nature of human existence. (Chen Zhuxin)


Composition of Zhejiang Province (12)

My daughter's classmates call her "No. 23". There are 50 people in her class, and her daughter ranks 23 in every exam. Over time, with this nickname, she became a real middle-class student. We found the nickname harsh, but our daughter accepted it gladly. My husband said sadly that when it comes to company activities or old classmates' gatherings, others praise his "little superman" endlessly, but he can only play deep. The children of others not only have outstanding achievements, but also have many specialties. Only our "No. 23" daughter has nothing to show off. Therefore, as soon as he saw those talented children in the entertainment programs, he was envious. Later, when he saw a report that a nine year old boy was going to college, he was very hurt and asked his daughter: "Son, why are you not a child prodigy?" The daughter said, "Because you are not a priest." My husband had no words to answer, and I couldn't help laughing. On the Mid Autumn Festival, relatives and friends gathered in a spacious private room. The topic of everyone also gradually turned to the children of each family. While drinking, ask the children to talk about what they will do in the future. Pianist, star, political dignitary, children have no stage fright. Even the four and a half year old girl will say that she will be the host of CCTV in the future, and won a lot of praise. The 12-year-old daughter is busy picking crabs and shrimps for her little brothers and sisters and wiping her mouth with soup. It suddenly occurred to people that she was the only one who didn't say anything. At the urging of everyone, she seriously replied: "When I grow up, my first wish is to be a kindergarten teacher, lead the children to sing, dance and play games." They politely praised her, and then asked her about her second wish. She said generously: "I want to be a mother. I want to wear an apron printed with jingling cats and cook dinner in the kitchen. Then, I will tell my child stories and lead him to watch the stars on the balcony." The relatives and friends were shocked and looked at each other, not knowing what to say. The husband's expression was extremely embarrassed. After returning home, he sighed and said, "Are you really going to let your daughter become a kindergarten teacher in the future? Do we really watch her waiting for students?" In fact, we have used a lot of brains. In order to improve her academic performance, she asked a tutor, reported to a tutorial class, and bought all kinds of materials. The child is also quite sensible. He stopped reading comic books, quit the paper-cut class, and gave up his weekend lie in. Like a tired bird, she rushes from class to class, doing papers and exercise books one after another. But as a child, his body couldn't bear it at first. He had a bad cold and was drinking liquid. In the hospital bed, she also insisted on doing her homework, which finally led to pneumonia. After recovering from his illness, the child's face shrank. But the final exam results are still the 23 that make us laugh and cry. Later, we also tried to increase nutrition, material incentives and so on. After several times of tossing and turning, our daughter's face became more and more pale. Moreover, as soon as she said she would take the exam, she began to be anorexic, insomnia, and sweating. Then, she got 33 students who surprised us. My husband and I quietly gave up the vigorous activity of trying to grow up, restored her normal work and rest time, gave her the right to draw cartoons, and allowed her to continue subscribing to books and newspapers such as Children's Humor. The family has been stable for a long time. We are very distressed for our daughter, but in the face of her achievements, we have inexpressible confusion. At the weekend, a group of colleagues went on an outing together. Everyone cooked their own best dishes and took their husbands and children to a picnic. Along the way, the children sang and the children performed skits. My daughter is not good at home, she just keeps applauding happily. From time to time, she ran to the back, looked after the food, put the tilted lunch box in place, tightened the loose bottle cap, and wiped the vegetable juice out. She was busy, like a careful housekeeper. An accident happened during the picnic. Two little boys, a top math Olympian and an English master, clamped a piece of glutinous rice cake in the plate at the same time, but neither would let go, let alone divide it equally. They didn't even look at the delicious food that was continuously presented. Adults laughed and sighed. Even persuasion and coaxing didn't work. Finally, the daughter easily broke the deadlock by tossing a coin. On the way back, there was a traffic jam, and some children became anxious. The daughter's jokes were one after another, and the whole car was amused. She didn't have any time to spare. She cut out many small animals from the colorful paper boxes containing food, which attracted the admiration of the children. When we got off the bus, everyone got their own Chinese zodiac paper-cut. Hearing the children repeatedly saying thanks, my husband couldn't help smiling proudly. After the mid-term exam, I received a phone call from my daughter's head teacher. First of all, I learned that my daughter's performance is still medium. However, he said that there was a strange thing he wanted to tell me. It was the first time he met such a thing after 30 years of teaching. There is an additional question on the Chinese test paper: Who do you like most in the class? Please give reasons. In addition to her daughter, all the students in the class wrote her name. There are many reasons: helpful, trustworthy, not angry, easy to get along, etc; Most of them are optimistic and humorous. The head teacher also said that many students suggested that she should be the head of the class. He sighed, "Your daughter, although her performance is average, she can be a person. She is really excellent.". I said jokingly to my daughter that you are going to be a hero. The daughter, who was knitting a scarf, tilted her head and thought about it, and told me seriously that the teacher once said an adage: When a hero passes by, someone should always sit on the roadside and applaud. She said softly, "Mom, I don't want to be a hero. I want to be the one who sits on the roadside and applauds." I felt a sudden shock in my heart and looked at her silently. She quietly weaves wool, light pink thread, and twines on the bamboo needle, as if inch by inch time, in her hands, spitting out the flower buds. My heart suddenly warmed up again. At that moment, I was suddenly moved by my daughter who didn't want to be a hero. In this world, how many people aspire to be heroes when they were young, but eventually become ordinary people in the world of fireworks. If we are healthy, if we are happy, if we do not violate our own wishes, why not be a kind ordinary person. When she grows up, she will become a virtuous wife, a gentle mother, even a warm-hearted colleague and a kind neighbor. In those long years, she could live the life she wanted safely. As a parent, how can I pray for a better future for my children?


Composition of Zhejiang Province (13)

Pieces of crumpled rice paper were scattered in the study, and Yo Yo Ma's classical cello on the side became heavier and heavier. For several months, I have been unable to find a direction?? This is perhaps the biggest bottleneck I have encountered in learning calligraphy for so long. It took nearly four months to copy Yan Zhenqing's "Manuscript for Tribute to Nephews", which was similar in structure and strokes at the beginning, until the hairspring at the end reached a deep similarity. But the teacher always said there was something missing, and I kept practicing. Then crush the rice paper full of hope. The reason why Yan Zhenqing can splash ink so much is that his mood at that time, naturally, could not feel the emotion revealed by calligraphy. And I always believe that the highest level of calligraphy is not whether it is similar, but a self created style. Now I am trapped in this framework and can't find the direction at all.

By chance, I was lucky enough to come to the Shanghai Museum and enjoy Mi Fu's Story of Multiview Buildings. Among thousands of works, I only fell in love with it, and deserved to "brush words". The side front showed a kind of cadence when turning the pen. It was very heavy and unrestrained, and a little light in the middle. It was bold and unconstrained. Between the seemingly separated and connected crosses, I realized a kind of clarity that I had never experienced before. From that moment on, I seemed to put aside Yan Zhenqing's formality and was deeply triggered by the "brush words". What is more valuable is that Mi Fu formed his own unique style after copying hundreds of calligraphies.

When I picked up the pen again, the ink spread on the rice paper like flowing water. Although there was still the original shadow, the mentality changed greatly. I followed the direction of calligraphy. Maybe the direction of life is the same. When I go through the busy review stage, I always get trapped in a thick pile of materials. Sometimes, we should open our hearts to appreciate different landscapes, so as to gain the most essential truth. Maybe if you think from another angle, you will feel that there is a sense of darkness and brightness.

I smoothed out the crumpled rice paper and deeply appreciated the sound of the classical cello. From that moment on, I experienced a direction of calligraphy and a direction of life. As Liang Shiqiu said, "All the gorgeous things have become dull again."

comment:

We appreciate articles with experience, because it will touch our similar experience; We are convinced by works with thoughts, because they bring us to the highland of thoughts. What's more, when the two meet, the experience is more abundant with the support of thought, and the thought is more incisive with the penetration of experience. The little writer wrote his own experience of "practicing art" with ups and downs, and all his feelings were implicit in it, until the moment of Zen epiphany, enlightenment, suddenly enlightened - reading convinced us. What he gained is not only his artistic perception, but also his understanding of life. The metaphysical "dilemma experience" has gradually become a metaphysical philosophy. "From that moment, I experienced a direction of calligraphy and a direction of life, just as Liang Shiqiu said:" All the gorgeous things have become dull again. ".


Composition of Zhejiang Province (14)

When dusk came quietly, a wisp of smoke curled up not far away and kissed the sky safely. From that moment on, people had finished their day's work and began to enjoy the leisure with their families.

This is my memory. I have been away from my hometown for a long time, and I have gradually forgotten their familiar faces and sounds, and the appearance and aroma of cooking smoke.

One day, I was writing hard, and I remembered that I hadn't called my grandparents for a long time, and I missed them very much. I couldn't help dialing the familiar but strange number. My grandfather's voice came over the phone. He asked me about my recent life with concern. The sound is a little noisy. I can imagine that people are on their way home at this time. I can see the smoke rising slightly vaguely, and I think of the scene of playing the game of "jumping house" with my friends in front of the house. "All very well." I can only say briefly, because tears are flowing down my face now.

I decided to go back to my hometown to see my grandparents and the long lost cooking smoke.

The car drove very fast. I got off at the station before I could recall the scene of my hometown. Suddenly I felt a sense of panic. Fortunately, the old man with a hoe grinned at me, his white teeth flashed a healthy beauty, and he felt comfortable.

Walking on the way home, I looked around, looking for the smoke in my memory. But it seemed to be invisible by Harry Potter. It took a long time to walk slowly, but it took such a long time. I was disappointed and felt that I had lost the understanding with my hometown and cooking smoke.

The sky soon darkened. I quickly walked home. Suddenly, the whole person trembled and settled down there. In front of me, there is a faint smoke, with a little yellow, rising up leisurely in a calm attitude. There was a breeze blowing, and a real flavor filled my nose. I felt a thick warmth, which was the flavor of my hometown.

From this moment on, my heart and hometown are closely connected with everything. I know that it has always been there.

I opened my arms and ran home. The smoke, like an unknown flower, blooms faintly. When the wind blows, sweet pollen is scattered in the heart.

From that moment on, I knew that the hometown in my heart would always exist. It was as real as smoke, filled with every corner of my heart, and traveled every step of life.

Comments>>>

Kafka has his castle, Qian Zhongshu has his siege, Haizi has his wheat field, Qijun has her spring wine, and the author of this article has his cooking smoke. They are all metaphors, expressing the author's understanding of life circumstances. We read a deep feeling in the light and thick smoke. It is calling all the time, calling the return of tourists, and stirring the author's nostalgia for his hometown. Looking for cooking smoke is to look for the unique flavor of my hometown. The endless feelings of attachment flash in the abnormal psychological time and delicate emotional experience, moving people. Until the smoke has become a flower, always open in "my" heart, "my" journey of life will never be lonely.


Composition of Zhejiang Province (15)

The scorching sun is like fire, even the air seems to be thick, and cicadas only have lazy endings. Sitting on the tricycle, I let the weather control my mood, and my heart was agitated.

Bored with boredom, I carefully looked at the tricycle driver in front of me. This was a middle-aged man. His long sleeved military uniform was green to black, and his heavy pants were rolled up high. He was dragging a pair of old slippers on his feet. Every time he stepped on them, he made a "squeak" sound, and his heels were white, but the wrinkles were still dirty. A canyon like crack had been winding to the depths, The blood was faintly visible. The dark old handle witnessed the aging of the car, but there was a worn basket with several empty bottles in it where the license plate should be hung. Listen to the coachman singing an unknown tune - an incomprehensible dialect, but he has a good mood.

Did you make enough money today to make you so happy?

"Thank you!" "You're welcome!" I handed out the money. Watching him open his wallet, scattered coins lie there quietly, nothing else.

From the moment he opened his wallet, I was surprised. His happiness is simple, because he is happy.

Isn't happiness a complex formation? Isn't there a rainbow after the storm? From that moment on, I found that happiness is actually very simple. Because the end is already doomed, why not face it happily? It's no use crying, so we greet with smile. The reason for happiness is just because of happiness. What is the "golden list" and what is the "bridal chamber"? It's just a complex expression of happiness, just a limited pattern for happiness. Once "people" are set up, they will become "prisoners". How can happiness come from?

From that moment on, simplicity is happiness.

There is great beauty in heaven and earth; Life has great fatigue, hiding in the complicated place. People are happy when they are simple, but few are happy; People suffer when they are complicated, but painful people are bustling. Let go of your obsession with matter and believe that simplicity is happiness.

From that moment on, I understand that happiness is the reason for happiness. From this moment on, please believe that happiness is simple and happy!

Comments>>>

In the real world, there are big people and small people. In thoughtful works, there is no such clear distinction. In the small people, we can read a deep sense of life, and in the big people, we can read the shortcomings of human nature. The description of the details shows great skill. The description of the coachman's situation makes us feel some sympathy: cracked heels, old vehicles, worn baskets, especially the description of heels with association, which makes readers feel the same, conveys a sadness, and forms a tension corresponding to the optimism and openness of the coachman. The author read a great beauty of human nature in this humble coachman - contentment and happiness, which triggered a long series of thoughts, and then obtained a feeling of life: "There is great beauty in heaven and earth, which can be found in simplicity; there is great fatigue in life, which can be found in complexity."


Composition of Zhejiang Province (16)

Full score composition for the 2009 senior high school entrance examination in Wenzhou, Zhejiang Province (1) Please write an article with the title "From that moment on".

Requirements: ① The style is optional. ② The number of words shall not be less than 600 (poetry shall not be less than 20 lines). ③ The true names of place names, schools and people shall not appear in the text.

From that moment (1)

Pieces of crumpled rice paper were scattered in the study, and Yo Yo Ma's classical cello on the side became heavier and heavier. For several months, I have been unable to find a direction??

This is probably the biggest bottleneck I have encountered in learning calligraphy for so long. It took nearly four months to copy Yan Zhenqing's "Manuscript for Tribute to Nephews", which was similar in structure and strokes at the beginning, until the hairspring at the end reached a deep similarity. But the teacher always said there was something missing, and I kept practicing. Then crush the rice paper full of hope. The reason why Yan Zhenqing can splash ink so much is that his mood at that time, naturally, could not feel the emotion revealed by calligraphy. And I always believe that the highest level of calligraphy is not whether it is similar, but a self created style. Now I am trapped in this framework and can't find the direction at all.

By chance, I was lucky enough to come to the Shanghai Museum and enjoy Mi Fu's Story of Multiview Buildings. Among thousands of works, I only fell in love with it, and deserved to "brush words". The side front showed a kind of cadence when turning the pen. It was very heavy and unrestrained, and a little light in the middle. It was bold and unconstrained. Between the seemingly separated and connected crosses, I realized a kind of clarity that I had never experienced before. From that moment on, I seemed to put aside Yan Zhenqing's formality and was deeply triggered by the "brush words". What is more valuable is that Mi Fu formed his own unique style after copying hundreds of calligraphies.

When I picked up the pen again, the ink spread on the rice paper like flowing water. Although there was still the original shadow, the mentality changed greatly. I followed the direction of calligraphy. Maybe the direction of life is the same. When I go through the busy review stage, I always get trapped in a thick pile of materials. Sometimes, we should open our hearts to appreciate different landscapes, so as to gain the most essential truth. Maybe if you think from another angle, you will feel that there is a sense of darkness and brightness.

I smoothed out the crumpled rice paper and deeply appreciated the sound of the classical cello. From that moment on, I experienced a direction of calligraphy and a direction of life. As Liang Shiqiu said, "All the gorgeous things have become dull again."

comment:

We appreciate articles with experience, because it will touch our similar experience; We are convinced by works with thoughts, because they bring us to the highland of thoughts. What's more, when the two meet, the experience is more abundant with the support of thought, and the thought is more incisive with the penetration of experience. The little writer wrote his own experience of "practicing art" with ups and downs, and all his feelings were implicit in it, until the moment of Zen epiphany, enlightenment, suddenly enlightened - reading convinced us. What he gained is not only his artistic perception, but also his understanding of life. The metaphysical "dilemma experience" has gradually become a metaphysical philosophy. "From that moment, I experienced a direction of calligraphy and a direction of life, just as Liang Shiqiu said:" All the gorgeous things have become dull again. ".

From that moment (2)

When dusk came quietly, a wisp of smoke curled up not far away and kissed the sky safely. From that moment on, people had finished their day's work and began to enjoy the leisure with their families.

This is my memory. I have been away from my hometown for a long time, and I have gradually forgotten their familiar faces and sounds, and the appearance and aroma of cooking smoke.

One day, I was writing hard, and I remembered that I hadn't called my grandparents for a long time, and I missed them very much. I couldn't help dialing the familiar but strange number. My grandfather's voice came over the phone. He asked me about my recent life with concern. The sound is a little noisy. I can imagine that people are on their way home at this time. I can see the smoke rising slightly vaguely, and I think of the scene of playing the game of "jumping house" with my friends in front of the house. "All very well." I can only say briefly, because tears are flowing down my face now.

I decided to go back to my hometown to see my grandparents and the long lost cooking smoke.

The car drove very fast. I got off at the station before I could recall the scene of my hometown. Suddenly I felt a sense of panic. Fortunately, the old man with a hoe grinned at me, his white teeth flashed a healthy beauty, and he felt comfortable.

Walking on the way home, I looked around, looking for the smoke in my memory. But it seemed to be invisible by Harry Potter. It took a long time to walk slowly, but it took such a long time. I was disappointed and felt that I had lost the understanding with my hometown and cooking smoke.

The sky soon darkened. I quickly walked home. Suddenly, the whole person trembled and settled down there. In front of me, there is a faint smoke, with a little yellow, rising up leisurely in a calm attitude. There was a breeze blowing, and a real flavor filled my nose. I felt a thick warmth, which was the flavor of my hometown.

From this moment on, my heart and hometown are closely connected with everything. I know that it has always been there.

I opened my arms and ran home. The smoke, like an unknown flower, blooms faintly. When the wind blows, sweet pollen is scattered in the heart.

From that moment on, I knew that the hometown in my heart would always exist. It was as real as smoke, filled with every corner of my heart, and traveled every step of life.

Comments>>>

Kafka has his castle, Qian Zhongshu has his siege, Haizi has his wheat field, Qijun has her spring wine, and the author of this article has his cooking smoke. They are all metaphors, expressing the author's understanding of life circumstances. We read a deep feeling in the light and thick smoke. It is calling all the time, calling the return of tourists, and stirring the author's nostalgia for his hometown. Looking for cooking smoke is to look for the unique flavor of my hometown. The endless feelings of attachment flash in the abnormal psychological time and delicate emotional experience, moving people. Until the smoke has become a flower, always open in "my" heart, "my" journey of life will never be lonely.

From that moment (3)

The scorching sun is like fire, even the air seems to be thick, and cicadas only have lazy endings. Sitting on the tricycle, I let the weather control my mood, and my heart was agitated.

Bored with boredom, I carefully looked at the tricycle driver in front of me. This was a middle-aged man. His long sleeved military uniform was green to black, and his heavy pants were rolled up high. He was dragging a pair of old slippers on his feet. Every time he stepped on them, he made a "squeak" sound, and his heels were white, but the wrinkles were still dirty. A canyon like crack had been winding to the depths, The blood was faintly visible. The dark old handle witnessed the aging of the car, but there was a worn basket with several empty bottles in it where the license plate should be hung. Listen to the coachman singing an unknown tune - an incomprehensible dialect, but he has a good mood.

Did you make enough money today to make you so happy?

"Thank you!" "You're welcome!" I handed out the money. Watching him open his wallet, scattered coins lie there quietly, nothing else.

From the moment he opened his wallet, I was surprised. His happiness is simple, because he is happy.

Isn't happiness a complex formation? Isn't there a rainbow after the storm? From that moment on, I found that happiness is actually very simple. Because the end is already doomed, why not face it happily? It's no use crying, so we greet with smile. The reason for happiness is just because of happiness. What is the "golden list" and what is the "bridal chamber"? It's just a complex expression of happiness, just a limited pattern for happiness. Once "people" are set up, they will become "prisoners". How can happiness come from?

From that moment on, simplicity is happiness.

There is great beauty in heaven and earth; Life has great fatigue, hiding in the complicated place. People are happy when they are simple, but few are happy; People suffer when they are complicated, but painful people are bustling. Let go of your obsession with matter and believe that simplicity is happiness.

From that moment on, I understand that happiness is the reason for happiness. From this moment on, please believe that happiness is simple and happy!

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In the real world, there are big people and small people. In thoughtful works, there is no such clear distinction. In the small people, we can read a deep sense of life, and in the big people, we can read the shortcomings of human nature. The description of the details shows great skill. The description of the coachman's situation makes us feel some sympathy: cracked heels, old vehicles, worn baskets, especially the description of heels with association, which makes readers feel the same, conveys a sadness, and forms a tension corresponding to the optimism and openness of the coachman. The author read a great beauty of human nature in this humble coachman - contentment and happiness, which triggered a long series of thoughts, and then obtained a feeling of life: "There is great beauty in heaven and earth, which can be found in simplicity; there is great fatigue in life, which can be found in complexity."