Winter in Jiangnan.
It's a little warmer.
The cold has deepened a lot.
As.
Wutong drunk in Jinling.
In the gray sky.
The rustle of yellow and dry.
however.
Look up.
Between the stacked broad leaves.
There are scattered green leaves.
The glory of spring has flickered.
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