Full marks for senior high school entrance examination: 600 words of narration: a beautiful episode
Old Moon by the River
2022-11-03 02:04:53
Senior High School Entrance Examination
Narrative

[Composition Title]

Title: Beautiful episode

Requirements: narrative and description as the main form, and other expressions as well; The content is substantial, expressing true feelings and writing smoothly; Do not use network language. The full text should not be less than 600 words, but not more than the given words; If the school name and person name appear in the text, please use Yuying School, Siqi School, Xiao Wang, Xiao Li, Xiao Fang and Xiao Jing instead.

[Excellent Model Text]

Beautiful Episode

Life will not be smooth, more or less there will be bad times, but we can see these as beautiful episodes, because we can learn a lot from them.

Today is the first day of the senior high school entrance examination. When I was on the bus to the examination room, I overheard two boys mention the entrance examination permit. I was shocked because I found that I had made a big mistake. I forgot to bring the entrance examination permit. When I was preparing the night before, I left this most important thing alone. I didn't dare to delay any longer. I hesitated to explain the matter to my father. My father frowned and asked me, "How about going home to get it? It's still too late." I shook my head, in case of traffic jam when I came back. "The teacher seems to have a copy," I whispered. "Then call the teacher quickly." Father took out his mobile phone from his pocket. I dialed the teacher's phone with my heart up and down. My palms were sweating with nervousness, waiting for the teacher's severe reprimand, because the admission card was repeatedly emphasized. When I explained everything, the teacher did not blame me as expected, but comforted me in a soft voice and said that she would help me find a way. With the teacher's reassurance, my restless heart calmed down a lot. After getting off the bus, the teacher called again a few steps later: "Hey, Xiaojing, I haven't left for the examination room yet, or you can tell me where your home is, and I'll get it for you." At that moment, my heart was immersed in warm water, surrounded by a warm current. The teacher had to give up this method because there was no one at home. She later said that she asked me to go to the headmaster of our school to issue a certificate, and she had already contacted me. I thanked him repeatedly, but the teacher just told me to calm down and take a good exam. My father accompanied me all the way and never said a word of blame, which made me feel guilty. When I arrived at the examination room, I found the headmaster to give a certificate, and my heart was finally secure.

At the moment, I am writing fast. This episode before the high school entrance exam has passed, but I know I will never forget it. Because from this episode, I learned to be grateful again. I was grateful to my teacher. I didn't scold me for my troubles, but comforted me; I am grateful to my father for silently accompanying me all the way, accompanying me with anxiety and reassurance, never complaining. Thank them for every word of comfort and for not blaming them.

Life is a play, there will be episodes in the play, but no matter which one, we can gain a lot, and this one will be the most beautiful episode in my years of editing!

comment:

Forgetting to bring the admission card is a real incident in the process of the middle school entrance examination, and the little author learned how to be grateful from this incident, making it a beautiful episode.

This is a simple and elegant examination composition. The little writer did not use flowery words or sedulously use sensational expressions, but just described the context of the matter, wrote the true feelings, but read fascinating. The reason is that the author is very good at sorting out the narrative context from the complicated trivia, cutting down the complexity and simplifying, highlighting the focus, seemingly inadvertently telling, containing unusual narrative skills, which is really valuable for a high school entrance exam candidate.