1. Beauty can be found in the magnificent palaces, near the bombed bridges, on the fragrant flowers, or in the candlelight dancing in the wind; Beauty can be found in the extraordinary statue of Venus, or in the nightmare of an ordinary girl. Life and death are in two worlds, but beauty can shine on the edge of life and death, which is the power of life - the ultimate beauty of life.
Appreciation of good passage: This passage is fluent in writing. It strengthens the momentum with a very powerful parallelism, and fully emphasizes the characteristics of beauty everywhere. Beauty can be extremely grand, extremely ordinary, full of vitality, or incomplete. What the author wants to say is probably "this is the power of life - the ultimate beauty of life". Indeed, the power of life is the most beautiful, the most shocking, and the most sobbing. The author writes like a god, but when he reads it, he just feels that the lips and teeth are fragrant and the aftertaste is endless.
2. At that time, when I was in Nanjing, I just began to remember some odd things. A beautiful countryside often appeared in the picture. I quietly walked away from the adult and sat on the grass alone. The leaves of Chinese parasol trees began to fall slowly, bringing a lot of mysterious beauty into my heart. I was suddenly confused, and my little heart could hardly bear the excitement. I picked up a fallen leaf in a confused way.
The leaves are yellow brown and curved, like a boat carrying dreams, and there are two beautiful Chinese parasol trees on the side of the boat for a long time. Every gust of wind I shuttle in the rain of fallen leaves and pick up the plane trees everywhere. There must be one or two Chinese parasol trees sprouting on the grass that I haven't picked up, right? For twenty years, I seem to be able to hear the distant west wind and the rustling leaves in the wind. I can still see those boats carrying dreams, sailing in the grassland, sailing in the hope of a seed--- Autumn by Zhang Xiaofeng
Good appreciation: This passage expresses the love for the leaves of plane trees with beautiful strokes. The onomatopoeia of "Susu" is vivid and expressive, so that readers can also guess the scene. "Mysterious beauty" describes the characteristics of autumn sycamore trees. Mysterious and beautiful, the leaves of sycamore trees are full of infinite charm and beauty in the author's eyes, and are extremely infectious. The figure of speech is used to vividly describe the shape of the leaves of plane trees. The author describes the color, shape and other aspects. At the same time, he compares the leaves to a small boat. There is also a ship's side. On the ship's side is a Chinese parasol tree, which makes everyone who reads it fascinated and wants to see the beautiful Chinese parasol tree. The author is imaginative and shows the beauty of autumn vividly.
3. The sky is bright and the mountains are stretching. The clusters of white flowers are like a flowing river. It seems that all the life in the world came at the invitation. At this moment, under the transparent sunlight, they cheered, flew and turned into countless floating light spots. Such an afternoon full of white flowers always feels familiar, and it is a gathering that can be put into any kind of time and space.
Good section appreciation: This passage uses vivid and beautiful strokes to describe the beautiful scenery of the blooming tung flowers. The combination of vision and hearing, dynamic and static, is full of vitality and dynamic. By means of metaphor, the author compares the flourishing scene to the flowing river, and the sunshine to the mellow honey, which makes the scene extremely beautiful. The last parallelism sentence is strengthened, which makes people feel the vitality of the paulownia flowers when they are in full bloom. The author's imagination is full of romantic dreams.
