Characteristic method: select characteristic and personalized words to describe in a divine way.
In front of that hillside, after eight or nine rounds of battle, the Eight Commandments gradually came into the future. It was hard to nail palladium, and the strength was not increased. The fool said, "Monk Sha, come up and fight with him, and let the old pig show his respect." Instead of Monk Sha, he slipped into the wormwood, pumila, bramble, kudzu vine, regardless of good or bad, and crept into it. He never dared to come out again, even though he had shaved his scalp, pulled his face, and fell down. But I left half my ears red and listened to the bang. -- Wu Chengen's Journey to the West
Comments: The descriptions of "Yiliu", "Yiliu", "Yidun", "Yishandang" and other actions can only belong to Zhu Bajie, whose selfish and ridiculous character characteristics are vivid.
2. Coherence: Action is a silent language and a symbol of character personality. Write a series of actions of the characters coherently, which can make the characters stand up in the description of action groups.
Luda was so angry that he opened his fingers and slapped the waiter in the face. The waiter vomited blood in the mouth, punched again, and hit two teeth in the door. -- Water Story
Comment: This "one palm" and one fist "connecting action is just like Jin Shengtan's comment in the eyebrow review:" It is generous to write about Lu Zhishen, and it is also generous to hit others. "The description of these actions of Lu Zhishen is full of personality.
3. Close up method: use meticulous style to make the action, such as the close-up shot in the scene, stand out in front of the readers.
For example, the simple action of "knocking at the door" can be divided into the following actions: ① walk to the door ② stop ③ lift (right) hand ④ bend fingers ⑤ knock at the door. Accurately describe these continuous actions to form fluent sentences, and then you can specifically write the process of the character "knocking".
He dressed neatly and came to his mother's door. He pushed it gently. The door was closed and there seemed to be light inside. He hesitantly raised his right hand, thought for a while, slowly bent his forefinger, and gently knocked on the door. There was no response inside. He knocked three more times, but still there was no movement. He plucked up his courage and tapped again. Still, no one came out to open the door. He was stunned.
4. Add modifier -- when describing the action of a character, first use the verb accurately, which is the basis, and then use the verb
Add words indicating "direction", "degree", "weight", "speed" before or after it.
Direction+verb:
Ex.: He raised his hand high and I leaned to the right.
Severity+verb:
The teacher gently touched the student's head and kicked his foot against the wall.
Speed+verb:
The kitchen knife in the chef's hand danced quickly and he jumped up at once.
Degree+verb:
Dad beat it hard.