Topic content:
Comprehensive learning (8 points)
I will miss my mother if I don't see her one day
Willing to go shopping with my mother
When mom is tired, she will rub her shoulders and pinch her legs
Mom will answer back when she criticizes you
Mom loses her temper when she doesn't prepare lunch on time
primary school
twenty-four
twenty-eight
twenty-five
three
five
junior middle school
ten
twelve
eight
twenty
twenty-one
Poet Gibran once said: "The most beautiful word that people's lips can send out is mother, and the most beautiful call is mother." Yes, mother is like a flower, embellishing our life; Motherly love, like sunshine, makes our world doubly warm. "Mother's Day" is coming. Your class has launched a comprehensive learning activity with the theme of "Songs for Mother". Please take an active part in it!
In this activity, the class made a survey, as shown in the table below:
Subtitle 1: What do you find from the changing data? (4 points)
Subtitle 2: Please write another sentence to praise your mother after the following sentence, and use it as a song "dedicated to mother". (4 points)
Example: A mother's love is like a spring, which is implicit and silent but not publicized. Every bit of it flows from the careful care of her children.
Best answer:
Subtitle 1: As we grow older, our relationship with our mother becomes more and more distant and less harmonious.
Subtitle 2: Motherly love is like the sea. It is profound and broad without noise. The billowing waves are full of deep love for children!
Answer analysis:
The first step is obvious. The table compares the two stages of "primary school" and "junior high school". It can be seen that with the growth of age, children are more and more independent of their mothers, and their relationship with their mothers is more and more distant, and the contradictions are more and more serious. This can be seen at a glance from the data shown in the survey questions.
The second step is to imitate the writing, just use the rhetoric of metaphor to express the praise of mother. Note that the sentences should be smooth and the metaphors should be appropriate.
Comment: When analyzing a table, be sure to pay attention to the words and figures in the table. Most of the tables need to be compared, either horizontally or vertically, and some need to be compared horizontally and vertically. After comparison, conclusions can be drawn by combining the text description. It should be noted that the conclusion must be an overall summary of the contents of the table, rather than a reproduction of the text in the table.
In imitation writing, we should pay attention to the consistency of structure, sentence pattern and content, and some imitation writing also needs to pay attention to the number of words.
Test core:
Comprehensive reading and writing: give a paragraph of material to examine students' ability to examine questions, organize and play. The material is not only a topic set in the textbook, but also more flexible to connect with life and social reality, to examine students' ability to comprehensively use Chinese in a specific situation, to see whether students can find problems, whether they can be concise Express your opinions fluently. Therefore, students should pay attention to the hot issues in life, actively participate in practical activities, and express their design, experience and harvest in the activities in words. This is very helpful for improving students' comprehensive reading and writing ability.