The first paragraph consists of four sentences. The first sentence describes the picture macroscopically, and talks about the picture that seems ridiculous but thought-provoking. The second sentence describes the strongest visual effect of the picture. The third sentence is the theme sentence. It talks about the destructive effect of this phenomenon on personal development and progress with the explosive sentence pattern of 20 words, and causes thinking. The fourth sentence is to criticize this phenomenon with derogatory words, which is a strong criticism.
In the second paragraph, there are seven sentences. First, the first sentence talks about the general harm or cause of this phenomenon from a macro perspective. The second sentence talks about the first harm of this phenomenon, using "not only,The five-star sentence "but also" usually talks about the harm to personal physical and mental health. The third sentence talks about the second harm. It usually uses a luxury comparative sentence to make teachers refreshing. It usually talks about the harm of this phenomenon to society. The fourth sentence talks about the harm to family or school. The fifth sentence talks about a good sentence that replaces "for example" with 15 words,It means that there is no better example to prove it, as shown below. The sixth sentence is the emergence of sample groups. According to a survey, more than 80% of people who have experienced this negative phenomenon will be harmful to their own spirit and life. The last sentence is a diamond sentence of 25 words to predict the trend,It shows that if this phenomenon continues like this, it will lead to bad results, even devastating consequences.
In the third paragraph, there are six sentences. The first sentence is the next conclusion, which talks about the necessity of solving the problem. The second sentence is the first suggestion, which talks about strengthening legislation to punish this phenomenon. The third sentence talks about improving people's awareness about this phenomenon. The fourth sentence talks about a proverb,Let's talk about the importance of practicing my suggestions. Five sentences talk about the heavy burden of solving the problem. The sixth sentence is about a bright future after solving the problem.
Paragraph 1
(1) As is vividly revealed in the picture,, which scenes to be humanous and radical but thought promoting on second thoughts(4) This phenomenon of the theme should be combined successively or make illegal(5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
The middle paragraph demonstrates the hazards of the problem from two aspects and gives examples to predict the trend of hazards
(1) To account for the above mentioned phenomenon, several series effects have been put forward(3) In addition, nothing is more harmonious than subject to contract with a harmonious society(4) Last but not the least, no issue is as hard as the theme to increase family budgets, which is a developing situation we are not willing to see. (5) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below(6) According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced the theme will live a duel life or even feel loss of hope about the future(7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.
In the last paragraph, we should focus on solving problems. Two suggestions are usually to raise people's awareness and strengthen law enforcement
(1) From what have been discussed above, it is there, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the subject(2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
Positive and beneficial articles
The first paragraph talks about three sentences. The first and second sentences describe pictures. The third sentence is a positive phenomenon for social development. The fourth sentence is a simple picture with profound implications
In the second paragraph, the first sentence talks about a twelve word explosive theme sentence, and the second sentence talks about the eternal social meaning of this phenomenon. With a 35 word diamond level parallelism sentence, it talks about something that can make us continuously meaningful and conquer challenges and competition as long as this phenomenon exists,And finally to success. The third can be said from the negative side that if there is no such positive phenomenon, people will be depressed, have a sense of frustration, have no motivation to move forward, and have no future. The fourth sentence talks about two major benefits. The fifth sentence talks about the first benefit, which is usually to enrich life,Efficiency. The second benefit is usually to talk about some benefits of personal development or social progress. The fifth sentence is a five-star sentence instead of for example. The sixth is a specific example. According to a survey, 80% of people can easily change their lives and improve their quality by taking advantage of this positive phenomenon. You can also give individual personality examples,The seventh sentence is inverted. Only this phenomenon can make us become social success
The first sentence of the third paragraph talks about the super luxurious sentence of twenty-five words. It talks about the positive phenomenon of doing great things or small things, difficult things or easy things. The second sentence talks about two suggestions to make it better. The third sentence talks about the first method to make it better, usually playing its advantages and avoiding disadvantages. The fourth sentence talks about the second method,The fifth sentence is about a proverb, and the sixth one is about the long way to go to solve the task. The seventh inverted sentence is about enjoying a beautiful, rich and dynamic future as long as there is a positive phenomenon
The article takes team spirit as an example
(1) As is vividly described in the picture(2) The most striking feature is(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
(1) As is symbolically retrieved in the set of drawings, the fact that(2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
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