This is the end of the first volume of the story. First of all, thank you for reading this book and the friends who voted for my recommendation. Bow and thank you!
Next is the second volume, "Ace Line of Defense". Every time I upload a chapter, I will review it again on the mobile app, first to check for typos and sentences, and second to think about whether there are logical loopholes.
The first volume is not very long, with a total of nearly 70000 words. If I give myself a full score of 10, I can give myself a score of 6. I barely passed O.
In the creation process of the first volume of the story, I controlled the rhythm slowly. The reason for this is that I spent a lot of ink on shaping the character and narrating the world view. In addition, there are many foreshadows left for the later development. For example, Xiuyuan and Xing Ziyu were both unconscious when there were dark blue snowflakes behind them, and the point of Lord Youge was foreshadowed in the future.
Compared with the first volume, the content of the second volume will have more intense conflicts, because the foreshadowing is barely qualified. Although I am a little immature in describing the battle scenes, I will supplement this by consulting materials. The subsequent introduction of new settings will enrich the battle scenes.
Finally, I want to talk about the RV system. In the era of systematic literature explosion, everyone will write about the system. What the system brings to the author is the simplification of workload, and often the protagonist will become the slave of the system, as if the system has become the protagonist.
My attitude towards the system has always been non exclusive, but in the process of writing, I have been trying to avoid making the protagonist rely on the system excessively. The system should be a small part of the plot development, but it should not be the core of the plot development. Storytelling should be the core of the whole novel.
Of course, this is just a small point of view. The story in Volume II will take on the battlefield of Ace in Volume I, and I will try my best to write excellent works. Thank you again. If you have a recommendation ticket, please do not be afraid of the trouble. Please vote for this book, and it will still update two chapters on time in the future~~~~