There is a small bug, but no one has any opinion. What's the big bug?
First: Do you have a masochistic tendency? The protagonist is not being scolded, but on the way to be questioned. After such great achievements, he is still questioning. He feels that this group of wizards are little children. They are either on the way to question and ridicule, or waiting for others to ridicule. I will add to the ridicule.
This is the so-called Holy Land of Research? Are you sure you are not a group of arrogant and ignorant ignorant places?
The whole article is written in the tone of the protagonist, who is mocked, questioned and denied all the way. I don't understand how this is the same as the little bug you mentioned? Except the great wizard Herram, who has a little spirit of scholars and researchers, other people have no academic spirit and research spirit at all. Especially in the academic association, when someone publishes a guess or theory, he will directly clap the table and shout, which is a fallacy. Strange flower, too wonderful
Second: As far as the battle is concerned, as long as there is a leading role, the leading role will definitely have an accident. It is not enough to make the leading role a little smooth.
As for the attack of the Holy See on Wangdu, it was a surprise attack in the middle of the night and the lights were not turned on for a long time.
I feel that if someone else plays the leading role, they can arrange and attack at one time. But we must take our time. According to your words, first two hundred wizards put a trap, but the trap was dug in advance. Let's play magic, and then stand still. Wait for others to come out of the trap, build a bridge, put magic, and fight back. Then we wait for the lights to turn on. Two hundred wizards just stood there waiting for others to finish it.
This can also show the masochistic tendency, and the protagonist must suffer.
Even if there is a big bug, you should pit the protagonist.
You are a genius.
I never thought that people in the Holy Land of Wizards could not distinguish the magic. The Holy See has a way to detect magic, and wizards feel like a group of primitive people, clowns living in one place. Moreover, the mainland is full of witches wanted by the Holy See, and witches are everywhere in the world. It is reasonable to say that the positive existence has no greater advantage than the hidden existence, and the understanding of Chengdu by both parties to the other party is definitely more dark than bright, and the advantages are greater.
There's too much to say, I can't imagine
I just want to write there.