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Slim, who doesn't want to cultivate immortals, is not a brave man
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"Heavenly Way"
2019-08-10 15:36:12
Anybody else watch?
Anybody else watch?
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Crispy Golden Shark
2019-08-07 15:25:32
This book is really bad
As the guarantor of the first book, and as an old bookworm for thousands of years, this book is really terrible. I know that my book has nothing to tempt readers to read. It is 100% my fault. However, the author Jun's book is neither a eunuch nor a eunuch. My writing road will start from this book to the extreme,
If I still fail to succeed many years later, let me despise this time. Here, I will persist. Millions become gods. If this book is not millions, how can it be called a novel?
Hehe
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Crispy Golden Shark
2019-05-29 22:07:19
Do you think the harem is better or the single female leader is better?
I like a single woman
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Amun
2019-09-14 11:04:48
There are a lot of typos, I hope it can be improved
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fabulous
Crispy Golden Shark
2019-06-13 14:34:11
I hope you can be a little tongue biting, which is good for the author's creation.
When creating later, I feel that many people may hate the previous plot or the author's writing, so we need to put forward our own ideas and let the author grow (๑ ̀ ㅂ ㅂ ✧) (You can also ask the author to add a dragon suit here (´ - ω - `))
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卌
2019-07-14 21:29:07
Although I only saw a little
But it's not bad, but it's a bit strange. The western civilization and the eastern civilization are mixed, and there is a sense of discomfort
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fabulous
World super protected animals Texas
2019-06-27 17:11:12
Just looked
What color is the main character?
Give a thumbs up on the picture
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Argan_bc
2019-06-25 22:54:56
It's pretty good
I think the plots from 1 to 8 are good, but I personally think the future plots will not be good.
Slim is from Europe and the United States. What you wrote is adding the ancient style of cultivating immortals, which is not beautiful. You said that it is sword and magic, but what you wrote back after crossing back is that it is still ancient style of cultivating immortals. Don't you find the inconsistency?
By the way, this is my personal comment, and I only saw 10.
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Salt Baked Chestnut
2019-06-15 21:37:41
The author cheered on
Writing style: OK
Plot: Good
Brain hole: about this big
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Cold stars and cold moon freeze to the bone
2019-06-08 23:57:58
Update quickly
Hurry up and update it every few days
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haughty
2019-06-07 10:59:35
Author, did you vote for your only recommendation?
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